Fantastic attention to detail, especially the little things between Cas and Dean.
I can't wait to see where this story goes, I feel like it's getting sexier each chapter :)

I just have to tell you how great this story is. I love your writing style, you bring so much depth to your descriptions and characterizations without making it feel too wordy or cliche. It's like the perfect mix of poeticism and realism. You have such a wonderful hold of the voices of these characters. I feel like you've really developed on the foundation of Castiel set by the show which makes all of your characterizations so believable. You've put such a unique spin on the concept of this story and I love how the theme of each chapter is so multifaceted. It's that multidimensionality that ties everything together and really allows the reader to empathize and relate to your portrayal of these characters. I really enjoyed reading this story and I hope you update again soon because I can't wait to read more! Thanks for sharing your work with us!

I am loving this, getting to see the weaker side of Cas. You write it well, and you pay attention to the little details (whether scenic or personal). Keep writing :)

LOL! Way to go Cas XD
Loved this chapter to bits. Can't wait till next :)

I hardly can't find a story with an original plot, good writing and great use of narative. You, my friend, even did it better. Can't wait for more of this delicious and so exciting story.

I really like this!3

This is good start :) I like this.