Can you finish this story please I’m a big fan of Thorin Oakenshield

continue pls

Maybe, like, she's being attacked, and he runs in and saves her, and she's all, "Thank you" and he says "No problem.", but in a way that suggests that he loves her?

Merry Christmas and a happy new year! Still here waiting for an update. Wish you well

This is a really great story. Are you going to discontinue it? It's been a while since it was last updated.

I NEEEED MOOOOORRRREEEE!

Honey before I continue reading, (because you really are an excellant writer) I have to ask, are you alright?

Darius character makes no sense. One minuets she is depressed and sad and the next she joking and honestly being quite rude. A depressed person would not recover so quickly and they would certainly not be carefree and joke easily. You need to revise how she acts with the dwarves too. She has major trust issues and those don't resolve themselves. She can by no means be so comfortable with them yet.

The dialogue I found to be quite unrealistic and especially in a period piece this veil is what keeps your audience interested and believing that this is a real story. Every character needs to have a unique voice and speech pattern but these all seems to be very nearly the same.

Finally I believe your writing style needs a lot of work. The writing is very rushed and full of dialogue and hardly bothers with any description and you have a tendency to repeat words often and being quite sloppy with your paragraphs. Tolkien was praised for his descriptions and his imagtive writing and if you read the hobbit and reflect back on your writing this might help you.

I feel like you should have never separated Thorin and Daisy but i feel you bro it was a great book and please o please write more i am in BUT KILI AND FILI ARE MY SENPI then again love ya bye

Please continue

I love this story! Do you think you will ever finish it?

I am so anxious! Will Bilbo gain back her trust? Will Thorin figure out what wrong with Bilbo? Will Daisy forgive him? What's gonna happen with her and Gandalf? So many questions! SOOOO FEW ANSWERS!

I really do hope that you will continue this story despite the fact that's it's been a year since you last updated. I love your story so far, and look forward to reading more

PLEASE UPDATE:(((

I've really enjoyed this story and am sorry to see that it hasn't been updated in so long :(