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![]() ![]() that *sniffs and wipes a tear away* was *sniffs again* g-gr-great! *burst into tears and storms out of the room* WONDERFUL!WRITEMORE OF THEM-THEY ARE VERY CUTE AND NICE!LOVE YOU:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() A few grammar errors, but I was honestly quite distracted by the actual plot to really notice them. A tad OOC, since Ian would never smile 'shyly'. This is a Kabra we're talking about, after all. I think Amy was a tiny bit too forward, if you know what I mean. But other than that, I think you caught the aspects of the characters really nicely. Enough of the negative, time to show you how much I loved this. But really, I still have tears rolling down my face. That was so cute! I love this so much, you have no idea. See, I don't usually review because I'd rather be reading other fics haha. But I loved the way you expressed how Ian thought of himself. That was brilliant. This was absolutely fabulous. If only this actually happened. Yes, it's been two years, but I hope you keep writing. Amian is /my/ weakness. -Reine Des Livres :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was cutee ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you! This fic is absolutely gorgeous, and I really needed some Amian after reading the two latest books. WHY IS IAN LEFT OUT OF THE LOVE TRIANGLE? *sighs* One day, maybe. The quote you used was perfect, just like the fic! :) |
![]() ![]() Wow! This story is awesome! The characters are pretty IC, and I love the side of Ian that we get to see. Fantastic job! |
![]() ![]() Amazing! |
![]() ![]() this is the definition of perfection. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. Mah. GAWD! Awesome! Seriously, I loved it! If only it could come true in the series... *fangirly sigh* xD I love the way you write Amy, she's not too shy and stuttery the way some people write her. *thumbs-up* Continue writing! Also, liked the title and summary. The choosing of the title's very pro. :) Sri |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mah gawshness. :'O Why did you write this Why did you do this to me xD xD Jk jk. I liked it a lot it was perty darn good :D Sorry I'm being so weird right now ahaha... Anyway. I loved the setting, and the snow and stuff, the was excellent. And I liked the ending. The only other thing I guess would be that the dialogue was slightly confusing at times and the grammar could be tuned up a bit. But that's nitpicking, I think, this was a great oneshot. MERRY HOLIDAYS! Lovely |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well Arthur regained his humanity, Isabel at some point had a sprinkle of humanity... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I seriously miss Amian! XD And I seriously LOVE it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is my favorite one shot. EVER! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the quote you used for the summary! This is great! |