Great

Another great read, but I wonder why you created a new suicide attempt instead of using the supercomputer shutdown.

I loved that story more than anything I have ever read... you have beat out Sir. Conan Doyle and Jules Verne you are a truly gifted writer

Wow, this is BEAUTIFUL. I've been reading some of your other fanfics and I gotta say you're one of the best fanfic writers I've ever seen!

One thing I did notice though is that you tended to switch between 1st and 3rd POV in a single sentence, like for example :
"But she's seen Jeremie stressed before, like when he's spent all night working on anti-XANA programs. This is a different kind of stress, and I'm not quite sure how to describe it. He looks pained, but also relieved… and she assumes it's because she's still here"
She's to I'm and then back to she again. I didn't notice this with any of your other stories, though.

This story was so touching :D

This is definitely my favorite of your works. It's written so beautifully that its difficult for me to even put into words how great it was. Words simply don't do it justice. Even better the second time around. (Sorry, I was too lazy to login)

Absolutely amazing. You never fail to disappoint.

That was so sappy! It was soooooo good! I loved it! Just now I'm sad :(

That was magnificent.