Reviews for Everything Is Made To Be Broken
it's simply rae chapter 3 . 7/22/2015
Doesn't Ezra Miller play in We Need To Talk About Kevin? This is amazing, by the way. :)

-rae
dei-deifangirl13 chapter 4 . 2/16/2015
I have fallen in love with this story more and more as I had read. I am really glad that you wrote a sequel because I am definitely going to read that as well. Thank you for writing. :D
BreacJ chapter 3 . 12/12/2014
Love it. Please, go on with the story. :)
hauntedpumpkin56 chapter 9 . 8/2/2014
loved this story. great work. thanks for posting
Twilightlova20 chapter 8 . 7/27/2013
Please do a sequel! :)
charbeat chapter 8 . 7/3/2013
I loved it, best one I have read on here so far. I think you should make a sequel
gantyorn chapter 8 . 5/29/2013
You totally HAVE to write a sequel! :)
gantyorn chapter 5 . 5/29/2013
hello there :),

I thought I write my review now as I can still clearly grasp the emotions I felt while reading through the chapters...you know afterwards everything seems to be a bit blurry, just an aftertaste of a really good ice cream ..one you never have tasted before but instantly liked...the aftertaste is not bad but yet it isn't the main thing...

Sooo, apart from ' wonderful I don't know what can be said else. I couldnt imagine a better way to portray all the feelings( angst , doubts, ease), the characters involved and the happenings through Charlie's P.O.V ...
Your fanfiction is not just a mere try to do those things but its a pure success...its how it has to be with charlie facing his sexuality and struggles and patrick finally settling down for a guy...finally getting the same amount of love from his partner being sober ...and not having to hide anymore.

you use only a few sentences to do mentioned stuff. Impressive! :)
I hope you'll be writing more in future because I am more than willing to 'participate' in readin' your work!
greets

gantyorn
luckiehondo317 chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
okay i mean to have this revuew as a whole for the entire story...i absolutely love that you have the mind for this kind of story. i think that if there isnt a sequel in the makes then THERE SHOULD BE! i love your writing and i hope you continue to write more...i actually am a writer myself...i have only released one chapter of a story i started called "the perks of being numb". if you want to, yiu can read it and give me feedback because i would enjoy ideas from someone as great as you. i dont mean to sound like an attention whore, but after reading your story, i would love some input...yiu are an amazing writer and i feel like you could go somewhere big with it. please nevwr give up and keep writing!
Rebecca chapter 8 . 4/14/2013
Realistic, detailed, and touching, this story is one of the better Perks stories out there! I look foreward to a sequel!
YTFan chapter 8 . 4/7/2013
I love Perks and I love the Patrick/Charlie relationship. I wished that the author went into that side of the story more instead if just letting it fizzle out after the kiss.
Anyway, I loved your fic. It is most definitely one of the best Patrick/Charlie ones I have ready albeit there aren't many. I would love to see a sequel.
JuJu chapter 8 . 3/30/2013
Your story was amazing. You had a good plot. But the very best part about your writing was that you understood Charlie and you were able to write like you were him, and you did it so perfectly. I cant praise you enough for your talent. However there were a few technical issues like grammar and punctuation and all that bullshit. I don't know if you did that on purpose because he is writing as a freshman or if you just have to work out the kinks, either way this was absolutely fantastic and I loved it. I wished it had been longer. I would definitely read a sequel to this story. PLEASE write one.

Until next time, my friend
-JuJu
DoItLikeMe chapter 8 . 3/31/2013
OH ye yez yes! DO A SEQUEL PLEASE!
Rosmarino chapter 8 . 3/15/2013
Really nice story. Hopping for a sequel.
justliketheweather chapter 8 . 3/10/2013
PLEEEEEAAASSEEEEE DONT END IT HERE ! this story is AWESOME ! now that is over what the hell am i going to read now ! GOD IM CRYING GGREAT STORY ...I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING IT
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