| Reviews for The Lies You Weren't Told |
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TheHowlingWhiteFox chapter 14 . 6/13/2018 My heart is screaming in agony, a pain so great and vast it drowns me in it's wake. This story is wonderfully written and it's surely one who's effects will last with me until the end of my days. The ending specifically will forever be etched into my mind with the words of a thousand unspoken worlds. Thank you. |
razena chapter 14 . 3/3/2017 *Crying* |
ChelseaWalker14 chapter 4 . 6/4/2016 I think I figured out the code. Its to Zane right? |
Joshuad17 chapter 6 . 7/16/2015 It's 2:00 in the morning, but I cannot stop reading this! This seriously needs to be made into a live action movie, as well as Slave's Compromise. |
Sweet-Little-Bumblebee18 chapter 14 . 12/17/2014 More |
LeonardoTheLeader chapter 14 . 9/20/2014 Omg! I love this! Poor Zane! |
Revan 3 chapter 14 . 7/12/2014 I don't think I realized just how kindred Skales and Zane were. They're almost narrative foils... Saying that, I'm sort of sad Zane never took up his offer. Also, it shows great growth on Skales part to offer Zane a new life. That was nice. Now... Another story to read... |
Revan 3 chapter 13 . 7/12/2014 Is Julien supposed to cut out between the 8th and 9th boxes? Judging by the amount of work you've put into this, I'd say so... This was a nice, and considerably dark, not to mention somewhat... Epileptic fic. Very good. I'm sad to see it go. :( |
Guest chapter 14 . 7/9/2014 What are you talking about Radio Silence was less okay than this? I think I felt worse at the end of this one because Zane really did still have a choice... Also it was possibly a bit better written or something. All I know is that this had far more feels than Radio Silence does. And I just read Radio Silence. |
Guest chapter 13 . 7/8/2014 This is still good I'm going to say that that recording was really not that helpful... But didn't you say on "dead men can still speak" that the power source (I know it's different from the power switch, but still) would tell them how to defeat Zane v.0? I'd just like a quick answer to this, I'm not dissatisfied. yeah gotta read the next chapter wow I'll review that too just a minute |
Revan 3 chapter 12 . 7/7/2014 I liked this chapter, too. I might say that it was my favorite. Although... And this may have been intentional, but I couldn't properly place Pain's mood. It seemed like a mix between rage, malice, perhaps a twinge of jealousy, and a dallop of finality. |
Revan 3 chapter 11 . 7/7/2014 I don't know, I think that, all things considered, it could be a happy ending. Pyrrhic as all hell, but happy. After all, they won. :) (Sorry it took me so long to get to this. I don't know what happened... :( ) |
LuckySouthpaw chapter 12 . 7/6/2014 Oh my gosh. I am officially jealous. I love tour writing style and the way you portray the characters. I agree, Doctor Julien is one of the more "human" members of the cast, with his unique mixture of strengths and weaknesses. Definitely following, even if there isn't much of this story left! :) |
Guest chapter 11 . 6/29/2014 Not remotely happy. What are we considering remotely happy? On a level of Episode 34 to Radio Silence? |
Lincelot1 chapter 11 . 6/29/2014 It was worth the wait. I hope you're pleased with the result. |