bored now!

A nice story

I half expected Vi to die, but not with such an end result. And what of Jack? I am concerned

So Violet has gotten some pretty good revenge. That is good.

So Violet has her first fight in the new town, and Jamie finds out (in a terrifying way) that he is a super. No wonder all the Guardians showed up, with that much fear. Even though the Boogeyman couldn't have gotten within a hundred years of that light, probably, Pitch may have shown up and tried something otherwise.

So their relationship continues, and right up to an important college decision as well. Well, a very fine chapter, once again. I like how you keep Jack in perspective.

A very touching crossover. I liked it very much.

I shouldn't have read this 'cause once I got started I couldn't stop and this made me bawl my eyes out and I have to wake up for school in two hours and now I'm overly emotional and overall upset at how beautiful this is and I'm making long, run-on sentences 'cause it seems like the only rational thing to do when you read something like this-
:P
Great job.
You owe me a box of tissues.

A wonderful stress-reliever. I could feel that knot of mental tension unwind as these words continued. Thank you, very much. This will be reread.

My thoughts on the story...
Inserting the Guardians into the world of the Incredibles was not a meld I would have predicted, but having it presented to me, it makes sense. Your analyses of what each of the Guardians lost... I'm left wondering about the Tooth Queen and Mikołaj. Having Violet find a companion in Jack, having Jack find a companion in Violet, they just fit together remarkably well. Jack-Jack was adorable, and Dash was such a teenager that his antics made me laugh. There was little of the father, but what you inserted of the mother fit very well. The only thing I could have benefitted from was a meeting between the ice-user super (I think Lucius was his name?) and Jack. Perhaps this will strike your muse? I'm not familiar enough with either fandom.

Dziękuję znowu za odpręzenie. Serdecznie pozdrawiam,
Ciekawa Osoba

LOVE IT!

You updatedd! I'm so happy right now. I cried when reading the scene with Jack-Jack. Would you consider adding an epilogue or something like that?

My heart, it bleeds.

All good things come to an end I suppose. Still happy you updated!

LOVE IT!

awesome crossover! love every bit of it :D