| Reviews for Indomitable |
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RedBloodedMoon chapter 6 . 7/15/2019 Wonderful story. While there are quite a few stories with the same "Lelouch stays in Britannia" theme as this one, they often move in a direction I don't like. Thus one do far, though, is a dream come true! I seriously hope C.C appears soon, Code Geass isn't the same without here sarcasm ;P Updates seem to be rather unregular, any idea when we can expect a new chapter? Hope you continue soon! |
whiznoe chapter 1 . 6/17/2019 up |
Crystal chapter 6 . 2/28/2019 This has been an absolute pleasure to read. Amazing job! |
prayagraj976 chapter 6 . 2/28/2019 Lovely story,Please update soon. |
ThePhenakism chapter 6 . 1/15/2019 Awesome chapter ! Very glad to have stumbled across this story. |
Ghost chapter 4 . 10/22/2018 I hope you come back to this, I need more quality fics, nevermind more quality LuluXMilly fics! |
Cainabel202 chapter 6 . 10/2/2018 Excellent ! I would even say that it's the best Code Geass fanfic around ) What do you say about having Anya serve as Lelouch Knight ? With her being in the Aries Villa during the incident, they would have a connection. |
YOURLORDANDMASTEROFINTERESTING chapter 6 . 9/24/2018 Interesting |
s.k.f.f.f chapter 6 . 9/21/2018 plot never stops on the day, lelouch will stay busy. nice chapter |
chimera629 chapter 5 . 9/20/2018 Can Lelouch defend himself or is he counting on others to save him. Does Lelouch have any friends or allies close to his age besides milly and his sisters |
chimera629 chapter 3 . 9/20/2018 Honestly I'm not seeing anything hes doing to protect himself and his sister that wasnt did before |
chimera629 chapter 2 . 9/20/2018 Why is he talking to Cornelia like she isn't his sister |
arga101 chapter 6 . 9/20/2018 Another great chapter. You did well on the Brittanian homeland, can't wait till the story progresses outwards, since I understand it's still just building up. Hell Yeah Logistics! Best wishes! |
phantomace13 chapter 6 . 9/20/2018 I think one of the plot points the writers were going to use in season 2, before executive meddling, was to introduce Lilicia. I read somewhere, don't remember where, that was going to impersonate either Lelouch or Zero earlier in the season. As such, I always thought of her as the real female Lelouch; looks, age, personality, that sort of thing. |
Mr. Q chapter 6 . 9/19/2018 This story is fantastic so far. All of the characters seem like themselves so fare. I also love that Jeremiah is an important part of the story, not some random guy who pops up every now and then. Jeremiah, C.C, and Sayoko where if not Lelouches 3 most Loyal followers by the end of season 2 next came Suzaku after those 3 I might even put Jeremiah and Sayoko above C.C as once they joined Lelouch they never showed any signs of disloyalty or wavering from his side. I do hope that both of them stay relevent. It will also be intresting to who you make a better pilot Suzaku or Kallen personally I always found Suzaku the Better pilot and the hands down best in physicaly combate like hand to hand or stuff like that. With Kallen coming in as a very very close second as a pilot. For me there last fight in the show proves it, as the 8 Element's whas a far better Knightmare then the Lancelot Albion this was flat out stated, by Kallen if I remember right in there last fight, but for me the fact that it can be infured that he lost on purpose to become Zero for the Zero requiem to take place, but I digress. I am also extremely interested with what you will do with the Knight of the Round, I know that they are suposed to be loyal to the Emperor and the Emperor alone but come on you know the Nobles and Royal would seek there favor, as they have a special position that came with unique privileges that where special to them. I also hope that Lelouches dosent become the leader of a foreign resistance group like the Black Knights, as he does still live within the Empire and he has already shown love for his own country and its History, he might not agree with everything it does or how it works but he does not hate Britannia it seems in this story witch is a awsome change of pace. What would be cool is of he aided in Britannia taking over the world and then having a build up to a 3 way civil war between Emperor Charles, Schneizel, and Lelouch. Having the Royal Family, Knight of the Round, Generals, Nobles, you the whole Empire splitting 3 ways siding with one or the 3 men to become Emperorof the world, you could then take that and spin it into a ending or take it into crossover territory like mass efect or something. But what do I know right? Its your story not mine. No matter what man keep up the good work, its hard to find good Code Geass story being updated still so al be waiting for the next update. Happy writing and good fortune to you. |