I loved the plot twists... Please continue the story... You are an amazing writer!

I loved the plot twists... Please continue the story... You are an amazing writer!

you make more story of pokemon

Just found your story and really wsnna see the rest, hope u start it up again soon

Hey dude If you're still trying to give this story to someone, Ill take it, I always love that idea of ash Having luacrio as a father and having a gardevoir in his party

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es muy divertida

Hm, really good. I'm interested in how Misty and Team Rocket will view Lucario. Also will it follow the same path as the anime or will you make your own arcs?

I like it so far. I forgot what a Lucario was but don't worry, I'll search it up later. Only suggestion would be longer or more descriptive sentences. It seemed off, like the pov was shifting a lot or something idk. Thank you for writing this.

So are you continuing the story because I love to read more of it

So, your only focusing on Lopunny and Braixen? Does that mean that Gardevoir is being taken down and not part of the pairing? Is that too much for you to handle is what I like to know

So your still planning to keep Gardevoir in a way or are you planning to have Ash turn into a pokemon in a way in another story? Like say a Mystery Dungeon where the partner is one of your pairing options like Gardevoir as a Ralts first, then evolves later, or something.

I'm confuse now, does that mean you given up on Gardevoir in the rewrite? Or is she part of the pairing as well, just to be sure?

No to Lopunny. Monagomy is by far my preference. Also teacher Mew sounds fun.

Yes to loppuny for me that will be great of course stay with ash/gardevoir but i like the three way romance. well its your choice to choose i'll say go for the three-way romance