Reviews for King
Guest chapter 12 . 5/21/2016
Great u should keep going
RollingUpHigh chapter 12 . 7/1/2013
Awesome story! I love the Secret Saturdays and Young Justice, and I definitely wish there were more fics like this. One thing though: UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! I NEED th know what the hell happens next!
bo chapter 12 . 4/21/2013
this is awesome don't stop now this is really exciting!
Tmae3114 chapter 11 . 1/22/2013
New chapter! Yay!
They're fighting, I saw that coming, I knew they'd end up fighting. Interesting to see where you'll go with this.
...again? Really Wally? I would've thought you'd just take Robin/Nightwing's but Batman's? I want to see how that went now.
Tmae3114 chapter 9 . 1/16/2013
Zak's in the Cave! Drew, Fisk, Komodo and Zon are in the Cave! Only a matter of time until the reunion now! I'm excited for that. And Match has a name now! I quite like it. My suggestion is his middle name, and that makes me happy.
This quick update has be excited for more.
Tmae3114 chapter 8 . 1/16/2013
Yay, new chapter! Zak's coming to the Cave, and so are the Saturday's (minus Doc and Doyle) so a reuinin can't be far behind.
Also, the consequences of a few chapters back just hit me. Doyle became a Lord of Chaos and Doc became Doctor Fate. That is NOT going to end well for ANYONE. How did I not notice that before?
Eternos137 chapter 8 . 1/14/2013
I think the paranoia will still be there. heh-heh.
Tmae3114 chapter 7 . 1/12/2013
ZAK! Zak, zak, zak, zak, zak!
I'd freak out more, but I think I used up all my abilities in that on 'Cornered'.
Tmae3114 chapter 6 . 1/11/2013
Wadi! Wadi, Wadi, Wadi! Future!Wally gave Bart Wadi's phonenumber! That's going to be important later on; I just know it.
And Zak! Milagro's reaming about Zak! And Blue Beetle is connected to Kur! Does that mean the armour can be controlled?

So many questions and excitement! I'm going to be thinking about possibilities for ages now!
Tmae3114 chapter 5 . 1/11/2013
Why haven't I reviewed this yet? Huh, thought I had.
Again, this was awesome! It had me suffering moodwhiplash though, I went from 'No! Don't do it Doc! Don't be Doctor Fate!' to bursting out laughing the moment I read Wally's first line.
Sorry that I can't help though, I've already voted. I'd go for Callum though, just for the record.
Claude chapter 5 . 1/10/2013
Ansel! I like Ansel. I really like Ansel.
Are you one of the author who like proper feed back for their work? If you are, um, I not much of an English take it to bits person. But I am enjoying your story. It's fun to read, but not too complicated.
Tmae3114 chapter 4 . 1/2/2013
Currently, there is only one response I can give to this.
Flailing. Lots and lots of flailing. And squealing. Except it's 2am so the squealing is mostly internal.
SO MUCH AWESOME IN THIS STORY. Why must you write so well? If this was a published book it'd be the kind where I don't put it down until it's finished!

You're making me run out of positive things to say about how good this is!
Do I even need to say that I'm eager for more?
Tmae3114 chapter 3 . 12/30/2012
...it's Zak, isn't it?
Also, eeeeeee! Remember to breath, remember to breath...
This story just keeps getting better and better and better! I love how Bart actually ends up thinking that Beeman is Wally's professor and then Conner overhearing and then taking Jaime with him to talk to Wally...I need to keep reminding myself to breath or not squeal aloud while reading this! Jaime's conversations with the scarab are brilliant!
Awaiting more with bated breath!
Tmae3114 chapter 2 . 12/29/2012
This is getting good!
I'm glad you're giving Match a chance, and Wally's reaction top the situation is priceless! He started thinking it was Conner and then when it turns out that it isn't all he does is go 'Oh no, not again'. I am waiting eagerly for more!
Claud chapter 2 . 12/28/2012
This is as trippy as a iced over staircase. You understand that I love it. Please continue. There might not be a lot of people reading it, but it is awesome. It is a bit crazy and confusing, but that's mostly the first chapter. So keep writing!
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