...to me this is both heart-warming and great fap material.

*drowns in nosebleed*

Next time you write a bottom!Kid again, could you please make a longer smut :D With a lot of orgasm-depriving from Law cuz he has to 'punish' his uke (Ö3Ö)...and maybe with a few toys, definitely some cuffs or ropes to tie Kid's hands so Law can have his way with him

Ooo, Law on top, sneaky sneaky. This was well written though, so I wouldn't have minded either way

blushes furiously while fangirling

I love this fic :3 that was really hot :3

Chehehe
I like it that way XD
it's a great story
I think it is not so unlogical afteral Law is older than Kid and he really hates to get ordered around
thumbs up for this ff

awesome! keep on the good work! you have talent!

Sitting on the train, hoping to find something half decent to read and I come across this awesome smut? My night has been made! Thank you for writing and sharing this gem. Loved how Kidd bottomed in this, it was beautifully done!

I liked it! I don't think you have to worry about characterization issues, everything felt fine to me. Kid is a brash idiot and always macho, but I don't think he's ever one to back away from a challenge.

You did a really nice job establishing the attraction between them during the first scene in the bar, it was my favorite part. I don't think anyone could blame Kid for getting swept away by a seductive Law :P

I guess my only comment would be to include more dialogue during the actual sexings, but I realize that's a personal preference - I like what you did with Kid's slight hesitance about how things were proceeding, and if there'd been some exchange of that information, it could've made for a cute moment. I think it was something they could both laugh over, and Law might even be a little touched about being the first person Kid trusted enough to top him!

Overall, great job - and Merry (belated) Christmas! :)

Haha, 'challenge accepted' don't you mean challenge completed.
I loved the story, so well written :D

Merry Christmas

Damn that was hot..XD

O/O It's the first uke!Kid I read, but I liked it a lot _
I don't see Kid OoC, even bottoming. As long as he keeps his personality, it's fine (let's admit it, Law is NOT uke material either, we put him in that position because he's shorter and less muscular than Kid).
You did a great job, and I'd love to see more fics of this pairing from you :) (Or the "next turn" xD)