I gotta love some high school pokemon AU! I really like the character representation of silly Gold, strict Crystal. Perhaps it's weird, but I enjoyed reading the (awkward?) dating between Crystal and Green!

AAAAAAAAAA I LOVE THIS I LOVE YOU I LOVE EVERY WORD YOU WRITE NOW AND FOREVER

I just keep re-reading and re-reading and re-reading because the whole bittersweet feeling is something that is almost addictive. I really like how the whole thing play out, the part where gold ask the wrong girl out and also green asking crystal out and still liking her even though he let her go. I would love to see you write a story about green and crystal though, because it's so difficult to find any such story at all

jfc so bittersweet! I love it

This was a really great story and I think I really liked how you didn't make them hook up or kiss at the end because it was so much better that it didn't and it kind of suggests that they will one day. :)

Everything about this is so heartbreakingly perfect. Absolutely loved push and pull relationship between these two.

Oh, this was just lovely. I think you did a wonderful job writing this. Hope to read more from you soon!

I'm just speechless. It's soooo goood.

anyway, keep on writing!

-truth

That's so sweet. Gold does seem like the type to do a dumb thing like that. I really love this story xx

Amazing. Incredible. I can't find the words to describe your writing. It's perfection personified. The characters' personalities are laid bare, and every action is deep. Every single sentence has purpose and meaning. This is absolutely perfect. Descriptions are incredibly enlightening, and yet have the minimum length. Thoughts are clearly read from the characters. I've complimented your work before, before I actually wrote anything. It seemed like the best thing I had read back then. Now, I view your work as something only a god could come up with. I have yet to read anything that surpasses it, whether published or not, even with all of the amazing writers that have works that I read. It's truly a masterpiece, writing that is far better than anything ever written. I dearly hope that I will read more of your works, as your ability guarantees only the best.

I love this. It's simply so amazing and intricate. Even though it's an AU/AH, I think it could also serve as a brief character study, or at least the study of their relationships with one another, specifically Crystal with Gold and Green. Their similarities, differences, etc. This is just so great.

I've been trying to find a buttshipping and jadecrystalinneshipping sort of swap story. CUZ MANGAQUEST an OLDRIVAL are my OTPs xD and now I've discovered you! YAYAYAYAYA! I love all ur stories. I loved how blue was TE 'bad girl' in this FIC. And the thing with drama class. That suited her. Also when you described how gold had a black eye. I spazzed while imagining silver punching gold CUZ he's being a dick to crystal.

So you wrote the story! :D I enjoyed reading it because I don't remember seeing anything like this before (green/crystal and gold/blue) and like you wrote (and like we discussed) on paper it's like the perfect pair but in reality it just doesn't work because they're too alike and miss that spark.

I suppose the story missed context or 'history' sometimes (like the fact that gold and crystal had been childhood friends, that only appeared later) but your writing and characterisation make up for it.

Perhaps it's my imagination but I could also see some crystal/blue here, so I suppose your summary is true haha (everyone/everyone).

Anyway, it's been a while since I've read pokespe, but I can always count on you to read a good fic, so thank you for that :D

Getting the email notification that you'd posted a new story was the best Christmas present I could ask for...

... How come I can never find the right words to describe something I like sometimes? :( This would be one of those times, because I enjoyed reading this. :)