I love your story. Do not listen to the bad reviews. This people don't know the difficulties of an author to write a good plot as you do :)

Falin asleep here babe love u

this is a REALLY good story and I can't wait to read anything else you wrote. Good Job.

Too many POV switches. We don't need to know everyone's thoughts about everything. Ruins the story.

Thank you for writing this story. I have a great respect for those authors like yourself that push the boundaries that explore both the darker and the honest parts of what humanity is about. There are not many that often trigger an emotional connection to the characters and your truely done that. Thank you for being brave to write it, I was saddened it ended.

Great story! Thanks for sharing!

Im legit crying on chapter 22

chapter 22 is sooooooo sad!

I've learned that when someone puts others down that indicates they are unhappy with their life and/or jealous of those people. They feel the need to put others down in order to feel superior.

The only quibble I have is Bella shouldn't have been able to hike that far with the low amount of calories she is able to consume.

Angela and Eric? In the books it's Ben. We don't know that until the end of Twilight, but it's Ben. Hmmm. I'll just have to wait and see!
Great story.

"I know YOUR secret"

Way to kill the vibe...

Very nice I like

this is an amazing story !
I luv it !

Please don't delete this story I liked it