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*squeals* This is SO cute! only 17 reviews? where my Fujioshi's and Fundashi's at?

That was absolutely lovely! I adore the idea that they maintained and even strengthened their bond throughout the years. I wish /I/ could have a relationship with someone special as Naruto and Sasuke do.

Kudos for the cute and wonderful read!

I like the story.. Although the first part is like the outline of a story than actually the real story.. but still a good one..

love it hope you do more with them can't wait for more story

the first 75% of this story was adorable and sweet and touching- and then the sex was like, POW- in contrast_ too sharp and loud. i think the story would have been better served without the explicit sex (and i am a fan of sex)- but i'm also a fan of fluff_ and here it was hard to truly enjoy either when they were put together in such bold contrast to each other in so short a time (in so short a story).

i would post this w/o the sex as well, and i'm sure you'll get lots of positive reviews

This was really cute! Probably one of the best I have read in awhile. You did such a good job in transiting from the childhood years into the adulthood weddings. I especially love how you contrasted the two at the very beginning. I have no suggestions on anything you could change to fix it.

I loved it! :D Reverend Teddy! Bahaha! Kawaii!

Awe! That was cute! :)

Awwwww cute! Ahahhaha I love how Sasuke and Naruto first married when they were 6, by a teddy bear. Ah, the innocence of childhood.

giggle this is grate i like how you worked it from one time to another it was verry good thank you and hope to see more soon hehe

aawww... love it! ChibiSasu and ChibiNaru are so cute XD

Awe this is do kawaiii! I love it great job!

The top half of this was so cute! even though it was short I was ready to cry xD cute stuffs are really awesome!

The bottom...wow...lucky them huh xD

Overall I loved it no matter how short keep writing!
-Dawn