TOO SHORT! 2 paragraphs? Really?

if this is meant to be a one-shot you have missed the mark. My goodness this story has no premise and no real story/background.

Please don't be offended but to me (And only me) this was could have been longer. I have read your other stories and the impression I got from those is that you can do better than this one-shot. I am a little disappointed. You could have done so much more with this.

Anyway - happy New Year! I apologise if this review offends you - I like all your other stories so don't think that I am upset with this story as I said I know you could have done a lot better with this storyline.