Yeah, to be honest, there are probably dozens or hundreds of Eliza Browns for every demigod. Even with the mist, you can't conceal everything.
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Nice! I like stories with jealousy and girls trying to make move on Percy!

Really interesting!

Someone's jealous. Great story!

Hi.

Okay, so this is horribly, horribly late. Sorry about that- distraction is no excuse but that doesn't stop RL from bashing me over the head and convincing me otherwise on a periodic basis.

So anyway. I always love seeing things from outsider perspectives, and this is no exception. Eliza's reactions and opinions were entertaining, as was the weirdness that follows int he wake of all demigods. Just muggle/magic interactions... :3

And jealous!Annabeth which is kinda the default mode for her, I think. Jealous!Annabeth is nice. It's always nice when tropes get subverted, and Clingy Jealous Guy girls qualify. :3

:( Don't worry, Eliza, I'm not good enough to have a guy like Percy either! I'm too ugly to compete with Annabeth... ;(

Awesome. This is a great story. Love it.

LOL. Percy is always the ignorant one!
Nice to see the view from a mortal's eyes.