Love it!

Wonderful story. I am so glad you wrote this! I saw your work on Heart of Camelot site. It is wonderful that something good / happy happen to Merlin. I really hated that the show never gave anything to Merlin...(Albion, love or recognition). It took everything you loved about Merlin character and made him into broken man.

I love this story!

Hey! This is the first fanfic I have ever read (somewhere in dec 2012). You sort of are the reason why I started to hang out in this site... Isn't it funny?
I remember liking this story so much, that I started to read even more fanfics. You can guess the rest. (I guess :D). So I just found this again, and thought: 'Why not?' and I'm sending you this sort of 'thank you' message. I guess I could PM, but that thing sort of freaks me out... But hey, I liked the story a lot, and it made me a fanfiction freak.
Okkey. See ya! ;)

Okay, let's start off with the more pleasant side of affairs.
-For a first time writing a fanfiction, I'd have to say you did a great job not only keeping up with it, but also having a good idea. It really is a great idea! There was quite an expanse of vocabulary used as well.
But...
your grammar skills, on the other hand, are scattered and incomplete. When finishing a quotation that encompasses a statement, you add a comma before the end quote unless it's the end of a line. Before a conjunction, such as and, but, or or, you add a comma. In a list, like the one at the end (food, a bed and good company), you place a comma before each item in the list. It would be, correctly, "food, a bed, and good company."
Also, capitalization. Merlin's name was mentioned at least 10 times in this chapter alone, and I can count the number of times it was properly capitalized on one hand. It's important.
And, finally, 'q' is NOT 'g'. When you were talking about 'guests' a lot, you had written 'quests' and it really confused me to begin with.

Oh goodness, I'm sorry for going on about this.

It was a very good story, very original. I liked William's character a lot. Honestly, I guessed that William was Merlin's son right away but not the whole 'Merlin's a King' thing of course. So thanks for sharing your story!

My thoughts on whether you should write a sequel?
YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES!
This story was sooooo entertaining and as soon as I saw it I couldn't stop reading it!

AWESOMEST PIECES OF WRITING EVER!

Please, please, please write a sequel! I would love to read it. This story was awesome and I'd love to see what happens next! :)

Loved loved this story. Please write a sequal

I like the ending as long as you do write a sequal. I want to read more concerning this family and world in you have created. It would be a shame if you did nott write any more.

Amazing Ending. I think I might cry, oh wait I already am. Beautiful, Amazing story. And you should definitely write a sequel.

I don't think a sequel is needed. This was as fun as it is. :) Good job!

I LOVE IT SO MUCH!
I NEED MORE!

Love it. I can't wait to read the final chapters. I love the entire story and would love a sequal.

Cant wait for the next chapter