This was absolute perfection.

I just cant help but feel weird about Sakura turning into Hinata and Hinata turning into a jealous female dog.. :/
Other than the slightly unfaithful character personality, this is nicely written

yay happy ending
nagisa woo

ino/saku is the best

Are you referring to the Nagisa from Strawberry Panic? I mean, she fits the bill. She's shy at times, she likes a girl, and she has red hair.

Dear god! Hinata is gonna go mad with power! And I swear yo...Ino is trippin balls...she prolly tried shrooms...

Btw...why were the other girls raped if they wanted a princess? Will Hinata be raped?...TORA OUT! (even though I changed my pen name I still do that)

OMFG HINATA IS NOT THAT FUCKING MEAN!

Btw...loving the story so far...TORA OUT!

I enjoyed this story very much, especially the Saku/Ina pairing was well written.

I also dug the plot, a lot of it was well done.

As far as criticism goes, I felt that the characters started to love a bit too fast.
I mean, Hinata and Ino kiss for like 2 times and Hinata's so in love with her that she is jealous and starts hating on Sakura?
Same goes for Tenten's love for Hinata. What is it even based on? There's no word of her being previously attracted to the Hyuga, then they kiss one time in the Onsen and bam she's so in love with Hinata that she trusts her completely and is willing to die for her?

I also found it a bit strange that all women in the story were lesbians.
I mean, Shizune loving Tsunade and InoSaku can almost be considered canon, but why was everyone else also into girl?

Those two point of criticism also play together, if the budding love would have been depicted a bit more, it also wouldn't feel as forced that everyone was lesbian.

ONE LAST THING! The above is offered as constructive criticism. I really enjoyed your story and added it to my favourite Naruto stories, I just felt that those two points were the weaknesses in the story.

This was a great story and I am glad that I took the ride.

this story is really adventurous and a great read... are hinita and tentengoung to get together in the end like ino and sakura did jw.

Every chapter I have read has kept me on my toes. Can't wait to read the conclusion.

You're almost there... I hope, cant wait for the ending! Hopefully it's happy :)

I must know what happens next! Its too good to not continue. Or not update for several months. (Sarcasm in the last sentence.)

Ah what an interesting story so far i have no idea how this was thought up but i must say Bravo on the plot and must ask that you keep on writing this so i can find out what happens to Sakura the suspense is killing me GAH!

Fanfic Reading Hedgehog

When I started reading I was very incredulous where this was going. I'm really surprised with all the imagination and originality you put around the whole Lilith awakening. Keep up the good work! I'm seriously on the edge of my seat here.