Thank you so much for writing this, its good to see people write about the good side of him.

It's a lovely story :)

That was beautiful. If you have written a sequel, I will gladly read it.

It was written so beautifully

Beautiful and emotive, in fact this is the most emotive piece of writing on the web however in the last part I found the emotive language too dominating careful not too lose the plot.

Wow! This is pretty awesome! I applaud you for it! You have a gift of awesome writing! I love the way you write, it's so beautiful, poetic, and descriptive! I love the way France is depicted here. There aren't enough words to describe the awesomeness of this piece! Well done! Keep up the awesome work!

I...love it. I feel a bit sad that almost everyone think of France as a kind of rapist and those kind of people. He's just...different, I believe. But you made this story and made me happy. Thank you :)

"Have you ever thought of France really as a kind, loving big brother instead of the usual pedophile, pervertish, flamboyant self?"

I have never thought of him as a pedophile to begin with. XD
I always see him as very cheerfull person who probably had a hard time through out history (just look at French history). Does he sometimes go over the top? Absolutely but he would never rape someone, let alone a child.

That was a really nice short story. )
I always say that there is much more to his character than fandom usually sees.

Such a sweet story! Very well written, you obviously have quite the intricate taste in music :) Keep up the wonderful work!

-American Gelato

Very nice work. I liked it so much I can't really find anything definite to critique. My aplogies.

I think this is a very sweet piece. I enjoyed the way you portraited France's emotional side with the music like that.