wow this was the best thing i've ever read. the part where he writes her a sick poem is neat. you know how long i've waiting for a fanfiction with my girl gravelyn? 9/10 could use more boobage tho

Um, sorry to burst your bubble (and to be a grammar Nazi), but it is spelled "Sepulchure", not "Sepulture". Also, Mavork and Nyjax seem to be renamed versions of Vordred and Noxus.

3333333333 SO AWESOME, I LOOOVE IT. However, from my stand-point, it's unlikely Gravelyn would abdicate her throne, also, I don't think a God really fits in Aqw, so instead of a resurrection, I thought Jasorick becoming an undead fits soo much better. Holy #### that confession poem is like, wowowow, Every day every week, it is you that I seek, DAMN S,OOTH AF DAMNNN. I RATE 13/10 should read, but if ya had some Tweeks definitely 1989/10 LOTS OF LOVE AAAAAHHHHH

My god Sepulchure is out of character! Not to mention you spelled his name wrong. Even if this guy is stronger than him, Sepulchure will NEVER be after. He would face it and fight the kid, kill him or die trying.

So basically Gravelyn is OOC because of how vulnerable she is right now right? And since there is no main time line Hero to give her closure with her fathers armor she is especially vulnerable right? Jasorick is still whipped though.

Yep he's whipped. On a side note kudos for using my favorite AQW character. Most people think of her as a dark empress with no character depth and no motive other than for revenge. When you think about it couldn't be farther from the truth. Imagine this you're Gravelyn. You're watching what was probably a loving and understanding father slowly turn his back on you. You don't know that it is because he's being forced to hunt you down like an animal. Your own father is slowly falling to madness because of the purest deed imaginable he saves your mother when the king couldn't be bothered. But not knowing this you do your best to make dad proud. But you can't, everything he does and every spell he casts is unreachable to you because of the very reason he turns his back on you. You are 12. Now four years later of this constant psychological torment your father finally reaches his goal you're proud of him as you can be. But he is as scared and withdrawn as ever because he knows he is going to be forced to kill you soon. And then he dies, killed by a kid throwing a temper tantrum because he couldn't the toy he was promised. You never got to make your dad proud. After five years of these thoughts you find a way to bring him back to make him proud. But then you find out why he did what he did as his own worst nightmares come to life. And after everyone you knew and cared about becoming mindless zombies, you have to kill what's left of your father even when you just want to scream I UNDERSTAND! But even now that you understand You have no idea what he would want you to do next. So dyeing inside you set off to have your sweet revenge and after that you set off to destroy everything he cared about because you know nothing else. That is what it is like to be Gravelyn Empress of the Shadowscythe.

Alright so far. I'm looking forward to the introduction of Gravelyn and knowing her she'll have Jasorick completely whipped.

NICE NICE NICENICE NICE NICENICE NICE NICENICE NICE NICENICE NICE NICE

Not that young...

ahahahahaa venenge is serve

Maybe you find what you wish

Umm .. I'm going to drop this .. Gravelyn here is so out of character .. I know that she's not as evil as her father but this is just not so her .. You should have made her a little Tsundere or princess like ..

I love this story. The way the scenarios play out from beginning to end,absolutely amazing.
I can picture everything playing out in my head just like a movie! In short,this is an awesome piece of work.

The letter at the end of the Chapter is amazing. each chapter makes me want to read more. xx

first Chapter was great. can't wait 2 read more xx