Hello! This story was amazing! Are you going to continue wrting it? I want to see how it ends! Also, could you please check out mine? Thanks! Please keep up the good work!

Great story I hope you'll finish it

Omg love love love this chapter so much

Wow ... I confess that I thought that the meeting between the parents of Andrew and Bridget would be more shouts and recriminations that civilized conversation. But I guess I have to take into account that they are English or Welsh, so in the end the truth is coming to light. I love how you're integrating Andrew, Bridget and Juliette, they really are acting like a family.

As for Siobhan, she really is falling low, with her everything is appearance and no real substance. It's funny, as she speaks and acts with such superiority, and yet not think twice to commit all sorts of crimes, such as robbery and murder, all for money. Because as she says she deserves everything.

I'm glad you had a chance to update your story, I hope you continue to have the time and inspiration for your story really promising.

illyara

Oh my god.
What a great story.
Congratulations, you've managed to continue the story very well.
Keeping the plot, the characters' personalities and also trying to solve all the ropes, which were at the end of the first season of the show. I fervently hope that you decide to continue with this story. And in return I promise to write many reviews support.

Greetings illyara.

pd. I can not help but imagine the expression of Andrew, to see his parents at the door, lol n_n!

This is getting more exciting.

I see improvement here over the first draft. This reads better. You are getting more into their feelings and actions. You can do more though. You can also make me feel like I am there and I am looking and talking to them. Be careful - don't tell me their clothes unless it is important to showing what they are feeling but look for what you need to do to put me in the room with Bridget and Andrew.

Please continue with this story. I really like it.