Wow, awesome story! Great job! Hugs for Kili! ;) I loved all the comments Fili made about being an older sibling. I feel him! :D

Love this story! Please Don't stop, I've become addicted. Also love your style of writing!

I would love to see this continue. I really would enjoy seeing the meeting with Bilbo through Fili & Kili's eyes. Also certain later scenes with their point of views could be great.

I've enjoyed very much and I would love to at least read the meeting of Bilbo Baggings from Fili and Kili's POV but I think that continuing through the book/movies wouldnt be as interresting as what you have written so far. So I say 1 last chapter to finish it up neatly.

No! Please don't stop! I beg you,please don't!

Good chapter.

very cute

Just discovered this fic! glad you are back and working on it. :)

Good chapter.

Ha I'm so glad I found this after your break :) love this story, especially how the boys look out for each other. Please update soon!

Maybe Kili has a point- if everyone would quit treating him like a dwarfling, perhaps he wouldn't act like one.

Good chapter.

Routine is good! Good chapter by the way! I was wondering though, wouldn't Thorin be a little upset about Fili havin holes through his hands? Like wouldn't that screw at least something up in his hands? And I really really hope that Fili and Kili are going to tell Thorin they were imprisoned by 'cannibals' sometime soon! Stay in your routine pretty please :D

OMG JUST AWESOMEEE!
I love these bro's, and I'm really glad I found this story. I thought the part with the creatures wanting to eat them was a little blurry, but the rest is awesome

Great chapter!