Totally called it

Really beautiful and amazing.

... I have no idea what you mean by "it really sucks" because this is leagues above most fanfiction posted anywhere. And if this is not your best work, I'd love to see what you think is better! I feel so inspired to write after I read your stuff, not to mention I'm going to need to marathon SAO again to get a hold on all of the feels this gave me... Thank you so much for putting this amazing writing out there!

Love it. Please do more! I can't resist KiriAsu fanfic, fanart, anything really!

I thought this was great. You do really good work.

A well written story if I've ever seen one. Excellent character building, a nice plot, accurate and meaningful dialogue, fantastic! However, a suggestion. Perhaps the descriptions are a little... wordy, if you catch my meaning. It's easier for a larger number of people to enjoy a work if it's in terms they can understand, not to do the public or your writing an injustice, but even an English Lit major had trouble keeping a steady pace for reading with that plethura of vocabulary haha! Just my opinion, but I thought I'd offer it. You truly have a talent, for sure. I look forward to reading more of your work!

This story made my day. Literally. One comment though: it seems like you threw up a thesaurus into this story. It was beautifully romantic and gorgeously fluffy, and the best story I've ever read on this site. That was the only critical tip I had. LOVED IT!

That word selection put such imagery into the writing, I'm not going to lie when I say this is one of the best pieces of writing I've had the pleasure to read. Job well done, to write that well it makes me think that you're an author IRL. Seriously job well done.

Hi!I LOVE IT!THANK YOU!
MERRY CHRISTMAS!
;)

I'll admit I needed my dictionary... Once... Three times... Ten... But this was amazing and I started dying from the fluffy fluffiness

This isn't your best work? Holy crap! Your descriptive prowess surpasses that of many great poets. This is indeed, something I would read again and again. I'd get to know it in the matter of an hour.

That, was so beautiful. I wanted to cry. Thank you for writing something so amazing. - t

beautiful simply beautiful I am in tears...that was...wow

That was such a great story. I really enjoyed it.

cuz it really sucks? i really enjoyed this story there are some awful fan-fics out there and this is not one of them this was pretty damn good