This is a very cute story, thank you for writing it :)

This story is so cute SO CUTE AND FLUFFY AND ADORABLE nd I honesty cannot describe how much I LOVE it, really those adorable kiss scenes while they snow fighting and when Takao jumped on him and drag in the house I was literally drooling. Ah ah I love KaTaka so much.
Thank you for posting such a warm story (it's warm really).
Those rings are beautiful by the way.

i loved this! . and Max is right! what is Christmas with out snow!?
loved Ray! and Kenny is so cute when he blushes!
and Kai and tyson and soooooooooo cute together!

That was awesome, hilarious, cute and excellent, I loved it and very nice job

So nice! And please I love to read the sequel of this story specially when they are children!

Such nice ending

I think this story is a wonderful idea 3

So cute and lovely! Please continue please!

I usually go from my fav authors list to go to your profile. And though I go see it (your profile) around once a month (which means I already saw your change of penname before today), I was still puzzled when I looked through my list and didn't see you penname. _; I forgot about it and kinda spend some time musing over the fact that I didn't see "Akane Yurika" anywhere...until I noticed a new penname that wasn't there before and remembered that you changed it. haha. Silly me. ;P

Anyway. I had no idea how much I missed your fics until I read this cute fic. :D It was just simpy adorable, Sue. *chuckles* Very Christmas-tale-like, with the "once upon a time" and bubbly and warm feeling that comes with it. And to be honest, I kinda expected a One Shot...it's not bad per see that it's not a One Shot, it's just that I really thought you were going to write a One Shot...I feel like it doesn't really make sense... *shrugs* Oh well. Don't really care. More chapter means more tyka cuteness then. I won't complain.

Mistakes time!

1. You wrote "Daichy" when it's supposed to be "Daichi", but I don't think you'll write his name anymore since he was only mentionned and not present in the story...apart if he will appear in the second part of it.

2. "In short? I say shopping sucks. I don't see why do women like it so much." he growled sourly.

I actually have two mistakes to point out in there. The first one is the "do" in the third sentence. You don't need to write it, it's unnecessary. The second one is the period of the third sentence. Since the "h" of the "he" is not in capital, I guess it means Takao growled out the sentenses right? If so then, it's not a period you must put, but a comma.

3. I'm not sure if there were more mistakes. Your fics are always so long. xD Besides, it's nearly midnight so I won't stay there re-reading it jsut for some possible mistakes.

Please remember that I am no expert with the English language, and even though I'm sure about what I pointed out, I could still be wrong.

That is all for my review!

Before I go off to bed...

MERRY CHRISTMAS! I hope you had a great one and received a lot of presents and delicious food and love and joy and happiness!

Can't wait to see the ending