Cute!

Very cute.

omg i don't deserve this cute little nuglet. you captured his toddler shit-ness perfectly. the gentleman toddler. omg his tip to the security guard: SO IN-CHARACTER. ironic interest in a donut-maker... maybe the salesperson was dishy? hahaha. LOL, i can tell crate and barrel is just as fascinating to you as it is to me. oh no he didn't. he did. child. ughhh, this is just so comfy. i mean, they FEEL comfy. like two friends just hangin' out. i love it. i could just float out on a cloud of blankets and peppermint cocoa bliss. you're my favorite elementary author, girlfran. i wish they would let you write an episode, because it would just be coddamned friendsy-ness with maybe a periphery crime and WHY DO I WANT THIS SHOW TO BE SLICE OF LIFE LOL.

i love you, dear. thanks for this fluffy little gimlet. (you are going to laugh when you look that word up. i pulled it out of my ass completely. )

Nice this perfectly captured both their personality s in a nutshell!

Loved this. You captured the tone of the show very well.

Awesome characterization and dialog! Can you write more please? Wishing you a Merry Christmas! Here's to many many seasons of Elementary!

Well done. I'd still love to know what present she got him.

This is gloriously cute, and well written to boot. Excellent Christmas story!

MW

So funny and good! :-) I loved the reference to the SodaStream machine. That stupid thing is advertised incessantly everywhere this year. You really captured both characters so well. Thanks for sharing.

Nice! A Christmassy whimsy!

Well everyone has the right to celebrate as they wish or don't wish. Some open padlocks, some view people who are padlocked, and some sit back with hot chocolate and marshmallows ( my choice) and just enjoy being with the people of their choice. Merry Christmas.