Yes this is WAY too rushed

Very wholesome

Yaaaayyyyyy! I loved it!

did i already review? i forgot from like 1 min ago

better than lost hero suprisingly

Yeah, it was a bit rushed. That's okay, though, it was still a pretty good read.

A little rushed yes and not nearly enough Perzoe time. but still a great alternate take on the series

I loved the story but it was VERY rushed

zoe and percy are so cute

yes tooo rushed

Alright, I get it that you don't like Piper, and you created Iö to replace her, but how does she fit into this, aside from being Jason's girlfriend? Like, after they returned from the quest, the one in which PIPER was required (not someone else: the forge and dove shall break the cage), which would eventually lead to Piper being involved in the new Great Prophecy, how did Jason go from sorting out his feelings for Piper to dating a completely different girl? Why is she involved in the new Great Prophecy and not Piper?

Also, I don't know if it's like an unmentioned Ancient Law or something, but there just aren't any demigods that have greater than 50% godly blood (as in gods don't have kids with demigods). They're more god than human at this point and would be too powerful, not to mention any other potential affects because of too much godly blood in a mortal. Now obviously, you, the author, could change this; it just seems like something that shouldn't be wasted on someone who isn't Percy (as in Percy being the one with more than 50% godly blood in his veins), but that's just me.

that was awesome!

percy and nooooooooooooooooooooooooo!

DO A FREAKING POTHENA NOW!

Maybe the ending was a little bit rushed but other wise it was fine!