J'aime beaucoup cette histoire.

Tes notes sont superbes.

Est-ce canon?

Hope to be able to read the entire story one day :)
Good work :) 3

Wey, esto está bien triste, plis stop hurt me, :c

Please, Please finish this terrific piece of writing! I would love to see how it ends and you have put so much time and effort into it that it would be a shame not to finish it. Thank you very much!

I've been reading the story, and while it's well written and does evoke plenty of emotion, I've noticed that Reese acts quite out of character several times. Yes the situation has pushed him beyond his normal behaviour but even so I believe that Reese would never intentionally harm a woman no matter what had happened.

Ooooooh, now THIS is unexpected! I can't wait to see what will happen! Please update soon!

Ooh, interesting plot twist. And you certainly do plot twists that are, shall we say... LESS TRAUMATIC than the current show writers! I'm eager to see where this one goes - and glad we get to see more of this story! ;-)

Wow! I did not see this twist coming. I'm so worried for poor Harold! I can't wait for the next chapter. And you are going to give us a happy ending, aren't you? Please?

I appreciate your story more than ever since I continue to be disappointed by this season. Thank you!

okay end this story quickly now ... somehow its seems to have lost its charm

Please - for the sake of us all (and especially for me): a happy end!

Such an amazing end of chapter!
Oh my god! wouldn't it be amazing if Mr. Reese returned to the room? I think so but there are so many things that could happen that I can't decide which one will be more thrilling and interesting, well I leave that up to you.
Keep your imagination to its limit, if thats even possible, and remember if you have a dream hold on to it and make it real just like you don't surrender with your stories.

Chpts 1-24: Good story. Very original and writing in another language! Well done. I love Harold & John as a romantic couple even though I'm straight. They are so perfect together...so lonesome, so beaten on by life, so intelligent with dry senses of humor. I don't like Shaw either but as long as she doesn't become a love interest she can stay if she has to (like I have a say so! Ha ha) I really don't like Root though. Don't want her in the story any more..at all..gone! She's too wicked and slippery.

'O' holy crap Finch! Don't do something you'll regret!