Ah! So the story finally endded. What a shame, it was a good story.

Anyway, the final battle scene was pretty good, good job! Though I find this chapter a bit rushed.

I was thinking maybe you could make Ulrika and Raze reunion at Vayne and Anna's wedding, but that was just my idea.

So to top it all, it was a nice story and had a lot of potential. Too bad Mana Khemia isn't that popular nowadays. Anyway, thank you for the story

I loved the end, I really like this couple.
Thank you very much for giving a great read, I really enjoyed this adventure you gave us.
I hope to read another story of yours with these unique characters.
One more thing
I really liked the story n.n

I loved to the chapter, please follow as this interesting.
In this chapter I was intrigued, finally explains how they met and Roze Ulrika thousand years ago, as was the tragedy of Al-Revis and because reincarnated.
It was very sweet to know that Ulrika was the desire of seeing his beloved, even though it took many years to reunite and try again now have a happy ending.
Please continue, the story really interesting

wow
new chapter!
this is a good story :D

Excuse me if you never leave a comment, I can only say that your story thrilled me to the mysteries that you put into the chapters, especially in the memories of Ulrika and Roze.
I'm really anxious to read the next chapter, to know what happened to Al-Revis, because Ulrika and Roze are involved in what happened so many years ago.
One thing I must add is that your Fic, is one of the few who have managed to capture my attention and make them follow the story.
Congratulations for the chapter and I hope to read soon 13. *_* O

Nice chapter... I kind of understand the story so far...

By the way, correct me if I'm wrong but you wrote
'jess muttered under her breathes'
it should be 'breath' ,right?
I'm not really good with english so I might be wrong...

I'm sorry for the short review,
I'm not good at giving review and like I said before, my english sucks...

Anyway, keep up the good work...
I'll be waiting for the next chapter... :D

Wow! Nice chapter! Now I can somewhat sees the plot here, but not all of it.

So basically, Theodore is maybe the king of Al-Revis?

And there are two wishing mana (A twin?), one who is a little bit psycho.

Ulrika and Roze are from the Al-Revis kingdom, probably manage to survived because of the wishing mana.

OKay, now you're getting me very intrested. Keep updating!

And I expect to see a VayneXAnna fluff moment soon!

Hey! Nice chapter!

i also like the hint you give that Vayne prepared his best for Anna at the dance party!

And I see you give some fluff moment for Roze and Ulrika huh? Cool.

And now, let us see how Lily does her work.

Hello there! How do you do?

Ahh... Its always refreshing to read a new chapter of a story... Nice chapter by the way.

I never thought Yun have that kind of past... I feel bad for him now, laughing at him and calling him a fire pit when the group are trapped in the snow on the game... Damn...

Also, I see Etna and Ed has joined the party, good! The siblings are back! And i never knew that their name are switched... You learned something everyday...

Ah, the fluffy scene, how cute! XD Good one. Ah, so thats what you meant by the kiss scene, a little cliche, but its good. And now i know that even the cold Raze got beat by the female infamous 'puppy dog eyes'. Such a terrifying technique...

Ah, the battle scene is good, not to worry, I dont mind the skill set, just don't put it too far fetched.

I spotted a few spelling errors, but it doesnt bother by much.

Anyway, keep up the good work! XD

I really like this chapter,I love that moment with Roze and Ulrika,keep it up,please update soon.

Hey there! Nice chap! And so you put more mystery in the story, much to my surprises.

I can guessed that the explosion somehow involving Vayne, and he's not suppose to be exist. And after the explosion, he is found by Brenard.

I like how Flay just appear and disappear like always! XD

And I think Roxis like Jess, but the pink head don't know about it, that's why Nikki declared she won't lose. I think so anyway.

And the next chapter we will be meeting Ed! She's one of my favorite
Character!

Anyway, I hope for a good fight scene in the next chapter! Also, you shoul make a love rival for Ulrika, like Ed, since Lily won't be joining their travels.

Anyway, good luck and update soon!

Splendid chapter! I loved all the surprises, it was so intense! Keep up the great work, will be awaiting your future chapters.

You update! Sooner than expected, thats good.

And so we get a glimpse of Pamela's past, so are you going to put another piece to her past or are you going to tell her past entirely in the next chapter?

Haha, evil Vayne, Vayne skill are consist of area skills, so if he's an enemy I can imagine the danger.

That blond man... He remind me of Gilgamesh ffrom fate stay night, with his power to launch weapons from dimension pocket.

By the way, I like the battle scene, though I'm suspecting Evil Vayne is stronger than Vayne himself? Or are they on par? Because Anna is quite powerful.

Also, you made it quite clear of how Anna worried about Vayne, with her showing weakness and all when she saw 'Vayne'. Nice.

So, when does Roxis come into play? Later maybe?

And if you can, add more Vayne in the story, the good lovable one, not the evil one. Maybe like, at the semi-last battle he appears? With Roxis or someone else?

So it seems you give Roxis a harem? Never see it coming, not a fan of him but, its your story. You should add Muppy for fun.

Anyway, good job! Update soon!

Hey there! You have finally update!

I see this chapter tell the sad tale of Ulrika past, which I like. You also seem to hint why Ulrika are after by the bad guys, but I cant seem to grasp it all.

I like the battle scene, its good to know you've improved! Nice going!

Also, nice fluff moment of Ulrika and Raze, I really like the scene where Ulrika tip toe toward Raze, and he woke up etc. Man, imagining it, its a cute scene (especialy Ulrika.)

You also seem to hint Anna weakness of Vayne related bad news, which I like.

And we have finally met Jess! Our lovable bomb maniac! Yosh!

I cant wait for the next chapter! Which I'm guessing about Pamela, or not.

Anyway, good luck, and update soon!

I'm Disappointed by how little the action is, at least put how hard they tries to walk away from the castle

But still, it have improved, and being better than before

I will be waiting for the next chapter,
Twin Judge of Gemini