This was perfect to the Nth degree. Sooo hooot! And Tony just kills me, he's awesome. Excellent!

Nice ending, LOL.

hehe i rather enjoyed this good job.

w innocent steve ish innocent

This story... is brilliant. Unconditionally the best Tony - Steve fiction Ive read. The characters are written perfectly, both their acting and direct speech. Im not sure if Ive read it or watched a short film- so easy to picture it was. I am clapping here for you, young lady. Youre so talented.

Actually that wasn't even close to 'love' nor was it really just sex either; there was no consent asked or giving which makes it dub-con at the best but this was actually rape, no longer 'struggling' isn't a sign of consent (some people are literally scared stiff/too scared to move, that doesn't mean that they willingly gave in).

Arousal and climax are also not signs of consent, they are a physiological/physical response to stimulus and will happen with or without consent, having them (arousal and climax) happen doesn't even mean enjoyment. As such you really should not only change the genre (there is no way that this would ever be classified as 'Romance') and place an appropriate warning either at the beginning of the story or in the summary.

Why do I not consider this 'Romance' in any way, shape, or form? Simple, romance is the result of love and love is expressed by placing someone above yourself, their needs/wants/desires before your own; Tony didn't show the slightest consideration for Steve in this or in his actions towards him, therefore he doesn't think of him as mattering more than himself. When a person selfishly forces themselves onto someone else without any thought to them and what they want, it is rape/non-con/dub-con.

As the story stands, I regret even clicking in to read it. And don't complain that I didn't have to read it, with there being no warning I didn't know not to tune in; your lack of responsibility and consideration left me without the choice of making an informed decision on whether to read or skip this story (if there was a proper warning and I had read this I guarantee that I wouldn't have left a negative review; yes, I can and do read stories with questionable consent issues but the authors have always behaved responsibly and given warnings).

Okay so this is the first ever Avenger yaoi story i have read... AND I LOVED IT! I never knew i could like Cap. and Tony as a couple!

This was very good! Really hot! But one bit of constructive criticism: they should really use lube. Otherwise it will be quite painful going in dry. And the bottom should be opened up some, especially if he's a virgin. It can be dangerous and extremely painful otherwise.
Great fic, though! :D

Wow first avengers story and gotta say wow lol is it a one shot or a continuing hopefully there will be more (: