Lol I liked it xD anyways yeag I just liked it, it made me smile like an idiot at my iPod screen lol when I was reading it I was all like :D looking like and idiot anyways I really lokee it so yeah poop

I thought this was REALLY cute! Please post more of your wonderful writing! (preferably Bade...i'm a little obsessed) ;)

Hahaha

awesome! Good job! :D

I liked it! Everyone seemed in character for majority of it and the entire story itself was funny and entertaining! I love the idea of the entire gang chasing Jade inside a Wal-mart hehe.

If i could make one criticism though? I fellt kind of disconnected reading your story since you never mentioned why Jade was mad in the first place. What happened? Why'd she punch Tori? Wha'd Tori do? These were some pretty key questions that needed answering and you didnt answer them :(

That aside, you did a pretty decent job! :D

Awwww, I wish she hadn't forgiven them so easily. I really just for ONCE want Tori to not get away with being the most selfish person on the planet and Beck to not get away with being condescending and preferential. This story should have ended with both of them feeling bad, instead they were just as smug as they were ate the start.

Loved it I just think the ending was too sudden I dont really like anything Jori but it seemed like too much of a dramatic change that she let go of her anger so easily at the end but the rest, the writing, the plot, and idea were amazing and original

This was really funny and random and totally awesome! Love it!