Well I hate to break it to you but Casien can't be allies with Katrina. Because she's dead. Katrina died in Chapter 39: This Arena Is Trying To Kill Us. In fact, she was the POV character for that event. Also, if you look at your list of living/dead tributes on your profile page, you have listed every character that died from a falling building in that event as Alive. Also, your total at the bottom is wrong. According to your list, there are 47, not 49, living tributes, and since you've forgotten to remove the tributes from the fallen buildings, in reality, there are only 42 (Nix from 3, Angel from 11, Collis from 12, Katrina from 13, and Wren from 14 all died in the fallen buildings). Too bad because you keep talking about the surprise in the top 40 and you were only 2 away from the top 40 when you stopped writing :(

Wow! I forget how I found you but I started with the Seventh Quell, read the Victory Tour & the 176th Games, and now this! I'm impressed with how much your writing has improved! When I started this one, I jumped to the end real quick to see if it was completed, and even though it's not, I decided I wanted to get into it anyway and go along for the ride. And now I regret everything! I'm so invested in some of these characters; I NEED to know what happens and who wins! You will probably never see this, but please oh please come back and finish!

Finish the stories you write. Nothing is more annoying than a writer who stops in the middle of a fanfic.

Update for god sake. I need to know who will win!

I just want to say I am LOVING the story so far, its a bit confusing with so many tributes but its so interesting to! Cant wait for the next post!

I haven't reviewed in a long time but I love how the story is going it saddens me that I have 1 tribute left but at least most of my tributes made it far the career fight just went by so fast I was like omg what's going on. Then rye just gave a good vibe off

Good to hear Ossie's been keeping a low profile and staying out of trouble. Hopefully she stays safe from here on out :)

I like the story a lot...well I wanted gadget and gizmo to win but they are dead...now I want Octavia to win

Oh no! Ronan! I thought he had a shot at the top 40. Oh well. I think I still have my girls from twelve lurking around somewhere. Hopefully their safe for now. I really liked this chapter. It was a good way to lower the career's numbers a bit. Will they end up regretting that decision later on?

I knew it was happening but now i only have one tribute left, I have faith in you Jeniffer! I'm surprised that 3(4?) tributes i was watching died in this battle Amy, Isia and Gadget(Gizmo?) This was a really exciting chapter and I'm looking forward to the next

Well my 3 of my tributes have died back to back well who cares they made it far enough sad to see Clara die i just can picture her mothers reaction. I also for sorry for my Whitney she mad it farther than her brother that's good .

Wow! I hope Isaline's gonna be okay :( great chapter! i loved the raven.

Omg I loved your bird mutations. They were really original and I almost prefer them over the dog mutts. ISALINE IS DYING WHYWHYWHY I really really hope she survives. Sorry for short review But i was at a family party but ill try and make it up to you next chapter

Another chapter? You're really working hard on this story and I loved this chapter quite a lot actually (Not that I don't love all the others :P) So Aria is finally giving in to the tortures of President Shepard. I wonder if she'll actually tell the truth or just make a big bluff to go home. Or maybe she wont even get to go home. I really can't wait to hear what happens between the two of them. Tension in the career pack is starting to appear. And its only the Eighth day. I'm really happy that Isia is ok. Now that Ronan is out of the Alliance I think he may kill some of the people who aren't in an alliance or he'll probably just kill anyone he sees. Thanks for the quick update!

I really like your story and I wonder if aria is really going to tell the secrets or try to make up fake ones. But I am curious, is there any way you could tell us how many are left after you name off who died at the end of the chapter? Thanks and good job so far