You know what would have made this so much better? If after everyone had left except Percy, the royals Reyna Annabeth and Leo or pretty much everyone involved in the trick Hecate came out and asked Percy how he did that and claim that he really was the child of the sea. I kept expecting it and it turns out my hope was for not.

Hahaha possessive Nico is awesome

AWWWWWWW LOVE THIS STORY! I was looking forward to reading one of your fanfics today! That got me really distracted in school though. :/

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Girls are NOT weak. Octavian, you have no clue wtf you're talking about.

GET THE HELL AWAY, OCTAVIAN. PERCY IS NOT YOURS, AND ANNABETH AS SURE AS HELL ISNT YOURS

Rachel is like a power hungry Luna Lovegood

I love the irony you put in this about how Percy is said to be a demigod when in real life, he actually is one.

Interesting story. I'm not sure how I feel about it exactly but I at least know that I like it. It's a good story. Now could you PLEASE tell me who the unborn child would have been. Would it be Bia (even though Bianca is still alive) or would it be Donny or would it be a whole new character that has never been seen before. I HAVE to know the baby at least. I can imagine his or her life after I know who it would have been.

I love it! Love it love it love it love it love it! More Leo would be nice though...

Sooooooooooooo good

I love Percy's bluntess x) And his relitonship with Leo is so cute ! And Frank is hilarious XD

This is very nice, I'm glad they found a way to free him and to them being married and having children D

The end is so sweet ! I love it ) And Leo is so cute and nice !

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