| Reviews for How to heal? |
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   lis3011 chapter 10 . 1/12/2013 So I can be your beta? I talk spanish and I know English! your book is amazing! Kisses! Besitos! |
| G.H chapter 1 . 1/7/2013 Right. First things first - I'll excuse the grammar since English isn't your first language. However if you already have a beta make sure to revise these chapters with them. Second this sounds like it has a mary-sue and thirdly has unrealistic events. First Why would a vampire say - Oh you're afraid of my eyes? no first they wouldn't know the person knew they were a vampire even if it was bella. and second they wouldn't be afraid of the eyes but more likely fangs or a growl. Their inhuman nature. So revise because so far it isn't worth reading. sorry but do keep writing G.H. |
| twiheart chapter 4 . 1/7/2013 Could Edward maybe get a little bit sweeter, he did love her after all. But that aside this is an AMAZING story! |
| han-oba22 chapter 8 . 1/8/2013 Love in it! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/3/2013 great story please finish it :) |
| han-oba22 chapter 3 . 1/3/2013 love it! |
| Skwad chapter 5 . 1/3/2013 I love this story. |
| TeAmLeO.56 chapter 4 . 1/2/2013 This story is really good! :) Oh, and... Please have Bella and Lu work things out! Are they really gonna kill Edward? Seems a bit extreme, considering this is his family we're talking about... Can't wait for the next chapter, and thanks for mentioning me! :) |
| han-oba22 chapter 2 . 12/28/2012 entonces en español jajaja bueno yo soy de costa rica y jajaja me gusto mucho tu historia yo tamb estoy en vacaciones te entiendo! |
| Hellen chapter 1 . 12/23/2012 i love it! i want to read more! |
