OMG I CRIED.

Not at Neku, pfft, he's fine. POOR BEAR KARI! DX. She's so fluffy, HOW DARE YOU *wapow* :)

Sorry about that last review D: My stupid iPod kicked me off and submitted... But I think you can write the fanfic without makin them OoC... It's a cute story, but could you identify the universe it's in? Is it alternate or another day? Good but I think you can do better than this.

This is okay, but still good. I think you should add more descriptions and make the characters more in character. Joshua is very OoC and I know you do this for humor, but a good writer can write the humor while keep