Nice one-shot, I like how you compared the two coulters.
Well, I'm off to more fanfic reading! :D

- Luminous

This is soooo great. I really like how everyone's in character-and it just makes sense.

10/10, keep going.

PM me, bobosmith01, if you want to respond, I guess. Hehe.

That part with the Mu training still haunts me to this day...*shiver*

Great story as always! :)
I wish this stuff would have been in the actual game...feels like they're all practically strangers to each other, they way they never (if not seldom) speak to each other. That's why I like reading your earthbound stories so much :D

This is just as good as your others! Just out of curiosity, do this one, The Last Minute, and From Bad to Worse to Better take place in the same continuity?

I wish Poo would have more recognition. Out of all the Chosen Four, he probably is the loneliest and most forgotten one. I always imagined him to be the one who was always a little left behind, because he has so face a brand new world; in Dalaam, there aren't any streets, or department stores, or anything like that. In my headcannon, he had to deal with the other three slightly mocking his foreign clothes or behaviours, or by the fact that he'd be mesmerired by his new surroundings.

I liked the way you picturized Poo, by the way he talks and acts so calmly. Still, maybe it's just because of the way I imagine every characters' personnalities, but I always imagined Ness to be a little obnoxious sometimes. Oh well.

Keep on writting! C: