This story is SO GOOD! I love the idea of them truly being loyal to one another bc they're totally not in the books! I really how you zoom in on different characters and the budding romances are rly cute. And I can't believe Dumbledore resigned!

I love your story, please update this year

Porque no has actualizado en 4 años? No es justo

If Harry was move to any other place than the borrow, it will be good. As it is then is stupid and moronic. Portraiting a good heart MoRon is stupid, just MoRon lover see the idiot as a good friend, this is running to be a gay stupid story.

I had noticed your story few months ago, but I put it aside, waiting to see if there will be some update, since I try to only read complete fanfiction, when they are that long. But I couldn't resist, and I started reading it this week.
I really love it ! I adore the idea of a much closer Gryffindor's house, of them being more loyal. Thank you very much to have shared it with us ! I just want to know, if it's possible, if this fanfiction is abandoned or if we still have a chance to read, one day, more chapters ?

Thanks again for sharing this amazing story with us,
Kisses,
Ellea

Ok, just what the fuck is Dumbledore playing at, telling a STUDENT that they should handle Voldemort's Horcrux all by themselves?

This is SO FUCKING FAR out of character that I wonder if the author of this piece of shyte is on LSD, or some stronger drug?

wait Percy is helping in kidnapping? are we sure that this isn't Jackson

Well that's that! Was that Dumbledore Percy was resorting to writing to? Or a wizard barrister father of one of his other friends who made themselves Harry's bulwarks?

I think this has been a great chapter!
One question though: When is someone going to be blunt enough to really clue Ginevra in on the younger Creevey boy's crush on her. Until she is clued into it, she's going to continue to be more a Ginevra (as far as being rather impatient and kind of cruel to him) than the truly friendly Ginny that the nickname implies.

What kind of stir would they make, do you suppose, if, instead of a wizard tent, they bought a recreational vehicle and drove it to the site of the campgrounds and Quidditch World Cup? Mr. Weasley wouldn't have been able to, but Harry and Sirius could, hmm?

I don't know eithernutrition potions for starters, and whatever passes for PTSD confrontational therapy in the Wizarding world?

Remus sure is indulging in some heavy duty self recriminations here! Blaming himself for becoming a werewolf? Really? He was 4-years-old for crying out loud! He was a victim of his father's political aspirations and Greyback's thirst for revenge.

Yet another proof of Crookshanks' framing by Pettigrew/Scabbers is that cats bring proof/ a trophy of what they did to their mistress. Crookshanks never did, ergo, he did not eat "Scabbers". Although that would have been the best end to Pettigrew for "ratting" out his school friends. Eaten by alley cat:even though the cat who did it would have had quite a case of hairball.

Neville couldn't help it: he's afraid of both, ergo, the Boggart became both.

I believe you have the wrong kind of peeled in place? Unless, you wanted it sound like Parvati was able to ring her orange like a bell? Otherwise, keep in mind, that whenever someone is taking the skin off fruit or veggies they are "peeling" them: Peel with a double e for doing that to fruit or veggies. This "Peal" for ringing bells.