All playing before my eyes like a motion picture.

And I’m not taking you anywhere in your pajamas and I’m driving.

So Stark

I think I might cry...for the rest of my life.

Ahhhhhh before I even read this I just wanna say I love this song and judging by the reviews I've read I'm gonna love this story too!

This is beautiful like woah man

I really enjoyed this story! Good Job!

You writing is so amazing and raw and emotional. Nobody in real life can kill a human being and just be fine. You explore the complexities of loss and betrayal, and in a way that makes it seem realistic, not just saying that the character is "sad", or "angry". I also love how you put the characters into situations that made them the most uncomfortable, even if it makes me sound a little sadistic(heh, whatever). Tony is trapped by imobility, Natasha is helpless because of her own emotions, Clint can't be independent anymore.
All in all, love you writing and hope you put out some more amazing works soon!

It was really good!

Wow I wasn't expecting it to finish this way but I like it. It was a very great story all together! I really liked it and I like that it is a kind of happy ending but not too much
Thanks for the awesome story! I really loved reading it

*sobs grotesquely*

It's beautiful and haunting and shattering and a whole bunch of words that I don't think you'd appreciate on your post but goddamn it, you can write! Like, holy hot dayummm.

I like how it didn't end in a 'Happy Ending' (actually that's a lie, I wanted a perfect ending where everything goes back to normal but that was never gonna happen once you reach past Chapter 3, at least) but how, even though this story was wildly out there and totally different from the characters expressed throughout the movies, you still managed to keep the essence of who they were, even as you changed them.

I kinda would've like to know more about Nat's spiral in "Kill him" madness - maybe you could do a slim one-shot or two-shot covering her lost six weeks? - but nonetheless it was a great story.

Keep writing you gorgeous thing you! :D

Wow, what an ending! Really loved this emotional roller coaster!

That was a really nice ending for a great story. Excellent job.

Needs a more happy ending and more chapters

A dark, disturbing journey that I'm glad you allowed us to take with you. Loved the elegiac tone of this last chapter - and that well-earned ray of light at the end.

Awwwwww! I'm so happy with that ending. I love lucky! I'm sad about Tony, but I'm so so happy that she was there at the end