I have gone back to this story over and over again because I just can’t get enough of it. It’s absolutely amazing, and I’m in awe of you and your writing. One thing that makes this story extra unique is that your “versions” of the characters have a slightly modern feel to them—mainly because you’ve used more modern dialogue for them. In any other Tolkien fic, this would bug me to death, but it fits your story and makes it even better.

And now you’ve left us on a huge cliffhanger. I read your A/N and I’m trying to be patient, but it’s been a year now, and the cliffhanger is KILLING me. So, if you want to save my life, please, please, please update! :)

nooooooo it can't be over, this was such an amazing story, and you are such a talented writer. do you plan on adding to this intense cliffhanger? it was truly an amazing story, thank you for writing it

I loved Bilbo and Kili together, they make an amazing team

I just read this incredible story. took me a week. You've got such a story twist going on I'm begging for more.

please

DUN DUN DUN! What a start.

I have just finished reading your amazing story... but but that can't have been the end!? Please don't day it's the end- this story is far too good for you not to finish! I'd beg you but Kili would kill me, please please finished this story. Of course real life may come first but... please?

I reviewed a few minutes ago as Blob and I just got an account. I'm following the story; it's truly amazing.

Are you continuing this story? I started reading this three days ago, and I have loved it. That cliffhanger at the end of this chapter really annoyed me, but not in a bad way. I have been looking for a good hobbit fanfic, and this one really surprised me. It's amazing how you do the characters so well. I was laughing for about five minutes when Kili kissed Tauriel; my family thought I was having a seizure. I don't appreciate you making Kili suffer so much (he's my favorite character), but you did it really well and I was in so much suspense for most of the story. Thank you for creating this! My only issue might be remembering that this isn't canon.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! you have to hurry at write this! (now I remember why I don't read stories until their complete!) I hope you finish soon!

As sad as it is to hear that you may stop writing fanfic, I wish you the best in your life, as fanfic is not what life is about after all. (Though sometimes I have a hard time convincing myself otherwise :) )
I hope you succeed in all you do! because by your writing, your future seems bright. D

NOOOOO you killed Bain! I know Bran is the kid in the book...but why?! :'(
(still love it though :) )

Woah. Good luck fixing this up. That's a lot of change... but your good at this (changing, fixing...) Good luck! I'm intrigued.

this is so sad! I hope Nori realizes it was self-defense, though I understand (not really though) his hate at him for killing (no matter the reason) his best friend. Its such an awful thing to happen!

oh my stomach hurts!it really hurts! my cheeks are burning with this unfamiliar muscle usage. Brilliant scene... so kili! It really emphasizes his age and his personality... then the water. D

oh... I really don't like thranduil for how he treats legolas (I still think of legolas as a good guy... even though you write him as a bad guy (though for some reason, I think you will change that...)) I hope you do... and the previous chapter (31) :( so sad. I hope he some how gets his arm back, like in the one story (forgot name... sorry!) when smaug gives Kili back his leg... dragon leg though. weellll see I suppose sense you already wrote more! D