If only this has more exposition, but,
the subtlety..!:o

I love is excellent and this ending, yes i am fangirling.

Oh I love this! There is not Nearly enough VanAqua fics floating around, and these ficlets make me crave them even more. _ You're a beast. That's pretty much all that needs to be said here. xD And I beg of you to please Please make another M rated fic. I'd be on it!

Most definitely one of the best Aqua fics I've read so far. She and Vanitas have a wonderfully twisted relationship and I'd love to see more in the future. Great work!

You going to follow up on this one? I want to see Ven and Terra reactions to this Van and how Van will feel about sharing his Aqua and if some of his old traits start caming back.

*faints* This is well it's a lovable chappie.

Gawd, I can't find words...

WHY CAN'T THEY REALIZE!?

Okay, I'm calm.

GGGAAAAHHHH! SO emo TTATT

*hugs Vanitas* Don't worry, you'll get her

VanQua is awesome. 'Nuff said.

Ahaha, Vanitas is so sneaky. Continue what you're doing, and Aqua is bound to be crazy.
Great chapter, by the way! Awesome! X3

OMG vanita's so evil XD do you think u can use 'haunted' (same artist) to continue this? Or how about "I'm just a kid " by simple plan that'll be great just lile your work

... Vanitas is selfish XD

Please continue this! They're pretty good! :)

oh wow.. i would love to share the fruit with vani w oh well just a mere dream this is cute and i feel sorry for him to not be able gives aqua the fruit. about the song... maybe Close to your Hearts by Rina Aiuchi? A japanese song that i favorited much XD