so cool you need to updata asap! love it so much.!.

You really like your drama don't you. Most of these chapters ended with a dramatic flair, it ended so abruptly. I still caught myself thinking where the next chapter had gone, and whether I'd missed something. All in all though a great story, cannot wait to see what else you've come up with.

Oh, I'd like to read the simple one, you know, the one where Lucy fell, Natsu saved her and they had to spend the night in a cave, before being rescued by Fairy Tail. Just saying...

AWESOME! Im juz wondering y i didnt read this story earlier.. its juz sooo amazin! I mean, lik ur writing and details r lik perfect and u never forget anything (example: the part where nalu got separated from fairy tail.. i almost forgot about it until i read chap 17..) and the story juz ends up perfect and logically. Lik ALL ur stories have great reasonable and logical plot unlike others (like mayb mine although i dun post them haha and im not complaining or anything) its juz lik VIOLA! PERFECTO! HAHA.. oops forgot the caps..
Lookin forward to all ur new stories and updates! Ganbette kudasai! (wait is it correct? Im trying to say "word hard pls!".. well something along that line.. u get it rite..) woah! I wrote tooo much..kay then bye3
-animeshojo :)))) cheese! *kacha* Okay this is juz random gosh i have to stop typin

Damn thats some fine gaben

I liked the story it was heartwarming!

Oooh, I enjoyed this very much! I like your writing style and how you started the opening. Also your character originally was spot on! I can't wait to read more of your chapters! Keep up the good work!

LOVE THIS STORY!

oooh please update soon! I love this!

Please update soon really good story!

I really love your story! 33 Update soon! :D

WAAAAAAAAAAH! OMG!

Please update! Its an amazing story and I will go insane if I don't find out what happens next!

why did you end it there, I want to know what happens next.

OooMG!

O-O it's getting so interesting!