Please continue this story! It would be really cool to see where it goes from here!

( Please, continue?.. And I agree about Jeff not being a Bad-boy. He's sweet and loving.. You can tell, but I guess he's pretty cool in this. And even though I absolutely hate the idea of him smoking, I'm not going to bitch over your choice of how you write your story. :) .. )

You should defently keep going with this. I REALLY like it.