They are brothers not lovers

You should make a sequel! Maybe, add some more OCs and maybe some OOCs and some more chapters would be nice. I'm just sayin'.

This was the best fan fiction I have ever read. Seriously, I really loved it! It made me laugh and cry and I love it. I'm not joking! It's just...epic! You are so awesome! I mean it.

Wait a minute! Is Shadow a Yu-Gi-Oh! 5D's villian or someone that WhiteXTrainer00 just made up?

Um...All right. Ew. Why would Yami kiss Yugi? What, is he, like, gay or something? Please tell me that he's not a Homo.

This is a nice story :) .

LOVE IT!

WOHOO! Thanks for the review, dude and cool sneak peak; it doesn't suck. And yahoo for romance, dude. Never thought you would, but hey! You're unpredictable. XD Anyways, keep up the good work and good luck with the "Gifted" story. XD X} Alex

This fic honestly seems kinda bland. But with a little work, it could become something great; just expand on what happens, maybe add in a side-plot or two, and you'd have an awesome story.
God bless!

Awww! Dude, I'm so proud. Happy New Years! Anyways, I loved it and awesome job! Alex XD X}

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Peace to you, too. Happy New Year's! Anyways, loving it and can't wait for the next update! Alex XD X}

I like how the other characters talk before and after chapters. XD

Yahoo! And yes, I know; you were busy. On vacation. Whatever and whoa dude! I noticed there was a lot of dudes in this chapter, but yeah, all the chapter do. Anyways, loving it and can't wait for next update! :) Alex