I;m not overly fond of spanking fics , but you did this well. If memory serves Kili is not quite an adult yet, the group have to rely on each other. And bilbo sure didn't want to do this! Nice work.

omg this is so good! i love it so much! i think you've captured thorin's character perfectly, and i love the snippet from bilbo at the end!

Like? No...loved it! Great job! Very nicely written!

Love it. It's awesome. More?

I see I am not the only one who felt this scene would have added much to the film! If they make a movie of your version, I hope I get to play Thorin!
Thanks for sharing this!

it was okay

Please wirte more of this stuff. I love parental Thorin so much. I loved reading this. The part about the turkey hunt made me laugh, and the comfort Thorin administered to both his nephews in the end made my heart melt. This was such a sweet story. I hope to see a story of Fili and Kili being punished as kids. I bet they were little brats.

I really enjoyed this very much! Short, cute, and having Fili and Kili getting the loving, yet stern correction they need. I wanna give them both big hugs. Great job!

Please write more of this type of fic! We need parental Thorin!

Awesome story please write more naughty kili

I just Love it

it...was...very...interesting! haha good job

Awesome story

This was adorable, I really enjoyed it. I love how Thorin comforted them afterword. Very nice

Fili and Kili sooooo deserved a good spanking after the trolls accident! ;) Thanks for sharing it!