I can't believe I'm favouriting this, but it's just too good. Let's be honest, Tris's life with Tobias would not have been a fairytale. Of course there would have been issues on Tobias's side - even if he didn't directly hit her, he'd live in fear of doing so, or almost hitting her, or the children they might have had, you get the gist. He would NOT have been fine after spending sixteen years with Marcus. And while I don't really ship Zeke and Tris, I'm glad he was there to help. Great job!

So cute

I liked the story.

I like it not a pairing u see a lot so really intresting

You made it believable. It could very well happen.

the worst part is that i can see most of this happening. no matter how much Tobias is scared to become his father and loves Tris it has a very high chance of happening even if it is unconsciously. also we know that he gets angry very fast as Tris described on many occasions and he did beat Marcus in Amity which shows he is not above it. but i think when it got to a certain point he would notice what he was doing and probably hate himself and try to stay away from her for her own safety. though based on how Tris really is she would probably fight him the first time he hit her. though she would probably lose based on size difference, muscle, and practice at fighting.

You are such a great writer! Normaly i don't like Zeke/Tris story's but this one is so nice! Do you want to write any further with it?

Wow, this is beautiful.

Awww, I can't believe what a sick twisted nasty person Tobias would have been had the war not happened, and the sad part is... all these stories where FourTris has a happy ending with no war are complete fairy tales, abused children 90% of the time grow up to be just abusive if not more so then their abuser. This is more realistic and it makes me really sad yet at the same time glad someone was brave enough to tell the truth rather then just another fairy tale. Thanks you.

UPDATE

I actually really like this and the song! I'm not really a ZekeTris fan, (fourtris forever lol) but this was really good! You really inspire my writing in so many ways, because you really don't write just fixated on one particular couple! You go girl!

I really liked the twist when Tobias is like his rather, Marcus! It was really exciting!

I LOVE THIS STORY UPDATE PLEASE! ZEKETRIS FOREVER

OMG this is so good I love zeketris! Continue!

YES! FINALLY ZEKETRIS CAN RULE THE WORLD! Too much Fourtris these days