I love this! I always imagined Tokio to be a bit like Kaoru myself, and it's nice to see her brought into a fic in the way that you have. Little examinations like this are some of my favorite things to read.

Thanks for writing!

-sf

That was amusing and serious and true all at once.
I particularly like the way you write Saitou- practical with a bit of a temper and a tendency to be annoyed, but also quite perceptive. Yeah, good stuff. Great job!

Haven't been on here a while myself. I need to get back in the knack of writing, but I don't think anyone would care to read anyway XD

Lord, this was pretty sweet! I've never read a Saitou story XD (Mainly because I hate the guy... Grr...)

A change of routine and a fresh look into the mind of our 'favorite' Wolf of Mibu. I liked every minute of it!

Beyond Doubt

Man...

You uploaded this 'Yesterday' and no one even bothered to review :c Shame on those who didn't review! This was too priceless NOT to!

Really, this was a true gem that I liked reading :) I appreciate good writing, and, well, yours is on my list!

Nice one! I especially enjoyed the line:

'And then there was one.

Feh.'

XDDD You really know how to add a mixture of feelings to your audience!

Please, keep on writing! You have too much talent here :D

-Wingless Hymn

Oh my. Poor Saitou XDDD

This story seemed very pleasing from the first sentence! :D I am very glad I gave it a shot! This was wonderful!

My only regret is it's not longer XD Nonetheless, I enjoyed it and cannot say I'd see it ending any other way :) (especially with such a humorous last line XDDD)

Keep at it! Best wishes! :D

Ollo! Just woke up this morning and stumbled across this story of yours!

I have to say, I like it! :D You really don't see to many fics about Saito's perspective when Kenshin did that.

Very descriptive and well-detailed! I even liked the bits of humor you snuck in there XD

-This Writer's Essence

'And then there was one.

Feh.'

'That ahou had somehow managed to defeat two crazed men, Shishio Makoto and Yukishiro Enishi, without dealing any fatal blows or even flipping over his retarded blade.'

These were not the best lines in the entire story, but rather, they were my favorite ones to read. I enjoyed the way you delved into the mind of Saito after Kenshin's act in the manga of wishing to continue their duel; it was a refreshing view-point as well as an interesting perspective.

This is going to my favorites.

Keep at writing! You have talent!

-Derek (a.k.a. sir-ecstatic) :)