Aww! This was sweet, I really needed a fic like this.
Keep writing and improving, I could see your improvement through each chapter, and am now eager to see the rest of your fics. Keep going, you're doing great!
Suggestion: Bagginshield with BAMF Bilbo. It's always fun to read those.

I loved your story! Good job

this story was great i loved it

So very good and funny.

:( not even a little bit of sex? like no real hardcore just simple?

This was a really good read! Well written and all around just lovely.

Isn't ori a paintbrush? Not a quill? just wondering...cause it says he's a quill in this chapter...

Wow! That's quite a tale. Enjoyed it thoroughly and really liked how you chose which objects the dwarves became. However, if you're looking to improve it, may I suggest commas before people's names in sentences? It will make it read more smoothly. Example: "I don't know what to do Thorin," should be "I don't know what to do, Thorin." Same wherever the name is placed: "Gandalf listen to me." / "Gandalf, listen to me." Anyhow, great idea, great story! God bless you.

i'm seeing a strong resembelance to beauty and the best here, like it thoue.

Oh lad, this really was best fiction I've read ;;_;; thanks of making it so perfect

Wow. Good job. And this story had my favorite couples too. Dwori, Durincest, And Thilbo

Thanks for updating your story. This I'd an awesome chapter and cool ending.:)

Noooo! Epilogue? So soon? I am in love with this story, and now more than ever. Love preggers!Bilbo. Congrats!

Thanks for updating your story. This is a neat and cool chapter.:) Please update your story.

Thanks for updating your story. These four chapters are awesome and cool.:) Please update your story.