Welp, there's Pinkie. And she apparently likes to play blackjack. Cool.

Ok, first off...hur dur, it says right in the title. This is FF VI, right? Otherwise known as Final Fantasy 6. Which I've never played (don't look at me like that, video games are expensive, and at least I've played XIII and Tactics A2). Anyways, according to Wikipedia the FF VI world doesn't have a name, so that kinda sucks. And it looks like Twilight is taking the place of Terra Branford.

Second off, YES, A CHOCOBO. So this isn't just an MLP fic with a FF skin. That means there's hope that other races will show up!

Third off, Snips and Snails get around, huh?

Hmmm...yknow, that's a pretty cool way to retcon Twilight. She's so thirsty for knowledge because she literally knows nothing. Well, almost nothing. And yay, gil! Makes me think this is Ivalice, even though it probably isn't. I am having trouble pinpointing which FF game this is supposed to be based in.

Hmmm...Do Chocobos and Moogles and all that kind of thing exist in this fic? It'll be disappointing if they aren't. So far this doesn't have much Final Fantasy in it.

It's well written at least.

I guess obscure MLP crossovers are just doomed to remain unnoticed. A real pity, because this seems pretty intriguing. I've been wanting a good FF crossover that didn't involve Naruto. Maybe I've found it.

Can some one please tell me why this story doesn't have that many reviews and favorites? This story is awesome mixing two of my favorite things into one. I wish I found it sooner.

So many refrences! I love it! I really like how you handled this whole chapter, from character interaction to the combat. I really look forward to how the next part of the adventure goes.

This is a cool chapter! The idea that ponies that live in vecterlot are happy and ignorant is brilliant. But whats with the (indent double) at the start of every line? Something from proofreading that slipped through?

I like how you changed what happened at Doma, And I'm glad that this story takes a few different turns than the original game. I hope to see Applejack and the others soon. And with Derpy, I called it :)

I must say this chapter was no getting a lot of love from me. I mean everything was going fine until the mecha Bear attack, I was throw right into battle with no earthly idea of what was going on, it seemed a bit rushed to me, It would have been nice to have Flim and Flam give a comical introduction, taunting our heroes before commencing a nasty attack. I feel a good opportunity was wasted.

I can imagine Rainbow Dash's pain of being weighed down by her land walking companions. It does feel like things could go a lot faster if they all could fly. I do shake my head at her impulsive ways though but she can't help herself in that regarded when you have endless freedom you have a tendency to ask irrational

Ah Brother and Sister together again.

Ah the battle rages on, nice job with the fighting scene it was beautifu as the one in the beginning. I was impressed by Apple Jacks braery in facing off against one of the Magiteks that took guts. Twilight had me burning up inside, I hate when people just surrender like that. (Its was really good I'm just stating my personal opinion) I mean seriously that would be a tacticians worst nightmare if their king piece said "I surrender"

I admit my heart was anticipating some good fanservice humor the moment I saw the title of this chapter, I was saddened however when I didn't get to see Apple Jack, Spike or Twilight a bit tipsy. I would have enjoyed seeing Twilight loosen up a bit or would have made my day. But I'm fine seeing one of my favorite ponies in this chapter is good enough for me. But Alas this chapter would have been perfect with a little fan service.

Since I took marketing in High School I enjoy a good bartering scene, I honestly enjoyed Rainbow Dash's chat with the shopkeeper. 300 gil that's kind of cheap compared to what other games cost. I can't tell you how many times I watched my brother play breath of fire running from town D back to town B because their prices on potions where cheaper. Is it worth backtracking though the wilderness I think so.

Geez Gilda someone doesn't have a friendly demeanor. Pinkie Pie no matter what dimension your in, no matter what role you find yourself casted into your as air headed as ever hehe. I'm surprised to see Pinkie Pie helping something ad oppressive and mean as the empire, but then I realize Gamblers usual side with those that offer the better chances of victory and in this case its the empire, or she could be neutrally trying to scratch out a living like everyother pony in this desolate steam punk world.

I agree with Spike, Twilight if something as powerful as Prince Blueblood is after you. You have to arm yourself for you'll only be a hindrance if you don't and in the world of Final Fantasy we can't afford any damsels in distress.

And thus the hunt begins.

This is a very nice chapter it was heartwarming at first but transitioned into one of painful memories. I like Stardust's personality its bashful, and arrogant, with hints of sarcasm sprinkled about like a sundae that hind the dark chocolate of grief beneath that funny French vanilla surface. He is saddened that it was his undoing that lead to his clan's demise. He was yearning for dreams beyond the cuckoo's nest so he jumped and flapped his wings knowing that he couldn't fly yet he took that risk and went crashing. Innocence lost to a heartless empire

From out of the freezer into the burner. The travel gap skip was a good idea, we didn't want a filler chapter. Well until further popularity I'll use I. Again your grammar, paragraphs and actions are very good. You maintain a good pace throughout your chapters. I see character development in Twilight. She seem to no longer be the scared little foal she was back at Neighe. But she seems to be growing too fast. Being more outspoken then her studding self was. That I found was a bit troubling. unless you mention she became less fearful.

Apple Jack's introduction was very well done. Butting heads with the overconfident Rainbow Dash, you gave a good insight into their past. showing they have somewhat of a friendly rivalry. You also broke the mold with bars. Not all bars are made for fighting. Then you left me very interested to know who it was Twilight was fighting off, could it be a phantom from her past?

Rainbow Dash sure is very cunning, she would make a good merchant, able to pitch a believable cover story for Twilight. I suppose one must be sharp with there tongue and knife if they want to make it in the treasure hunting business. You surprised me and that's good. Pen over sword. The accent of the bandits were annoying but gave a good example of their educational background. Showing not every story book thief speaks the queens English. I really enjoyed that part. The battle scene was drawn good. Most actions were crisp and clear I can picture Spike thrusting that lethal spear unto the maniac's neck.