its really good!

And this is beautiful omffss-
Great job!

I thought it was great, though I did kinda wish you put atleast some perspective from souls side of the situation. Anyway it's wonderful:)

OMG! IM FANGIRLING LIKE A BOSS RIGHT NOW THIS IS SOOOOOOOOO CUTE OMG I SQEED MY HOUSE DOWN 100000/10 5 stars CALL FUNIMATION CAN I GET A ENCORE CAUSE I WANT MORE PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER

This is your first Fic? No it's not. Have you even written before? Your whole damn story line was absolutely cute! But in general, you are a very good author and I usually don't say this. I always have one-twelve things to say to authors when it's their first time writing but you, god damn it. You're just amazing as it is! The details were resale good, the timing of the kiss was great and the whole thing just flowed right into it! Believe me when I say that you are truly awesome writer! I hope all goes well with your future fics! I'll be looking forward to reading them!

it was ok- but to tell you the truth, i thought i jumped in WAYYY to quick, i liked it, but i got lost easly. all i can say now is, keep it up, slow it down, and take it easy.

det var så sødt.

Love it :)!