Wow. You are one of thee greatest authors ever!

Aww. So Peter. (And... *snickers at Edmund*). I like Pevensie fluff and this fluff was done fluffily well. :-)

Ariel_of_Narnia

Impressive writing. Good dialog.

A lovely short piece.

I loved that note at the end, because it's so true! Well done, you always make them so alive! Just don't let Lucy dance in the snow again!
JFgirl

Love this story!

i loved it so much :D

amazing story :) (again)

Big Momma Peter strikes again. Not only is he doing him knight on a white horse routine rescuing Lucy then dancing her to bed. He tells Susan to get some sleep and Edmund is in trouble over his bruises.

Situation normal in the world of the Pevenise world.

That was very nice to hear about Pete and Lu again, I was really starting to miss them! I am thankful that you shared it; it is nice and fluffy as a favorite teddy bear.

Also, I liked the closing sentences:"But there is One whose vigil shall never cease. He is the One who watches over them constantly." That sounded really ominous in a good way.

Thanks for writing and sharing!

GwF

P.S. How do you suppose the Narnians view Christmas? Did Frank and Helen bring it over with them, or is it Aslan's birthday...? I know it's a weird question but I was curious.

Oh, I love this one. So sweet. Peter's so good with all of them. Well done!