Well this is interesting. My all time ship for Raven is admittedly Malchoir but I like to pair her with Aqualad as well as Red X. On that note, is Red X a hero now? Weird. Wonder how he became one in the story. Anyways this sounds like a great story and I hope you can continue. Good job and Good luck!

Keep writing more chp I'm desperate to know what HAPPENDS like if malchoir gets out of the book and if aqualad had feeling for raven

Please continue this! It is so good!

Update sooner and I'll love you forever…?

So other than the fact that you're a LIAR.
What else is going on in your life?

Ok so i have officialy signed up to leave you this message i truly respect your work and want you to continue writing .i love how you portrayed Malchior as protective and i can't wait for his reaction to what her older self looks like. I will be egarly waiting for your update. Also i love the smexy Winchester brothers too.

Hi i understand that in CA its 6:somthing but i have been stalking abd refreshing the page over and over every hour. So you have your first devoted stalker.
Congrats.
You should feel acomplished.

So every hour i check to see if you updated yet...

This isn't healthy is it?

Don't stop.
Just dont okay.
I have waited too long.
I will patiantly wait another day week monthand year so dont.

Ok so i have now revied 5 times and im getting tirerd of my comments not apearing so i will do this one last time I LOVE YOU SO MUCH PLEASE UPDATE TODAY IM SORRY IF YOU HAVENT GOT MY COMMENTS OR IF YOU DONT GET THIS ONE.
i love how you portray Malchiors protective side

So i have previously review 4 times and the havent showed at allbso maybe tis has happend to many others and thats why you only have 5 reveiwers but just in case this one shows i would like to say i love every thing from malchiors protective side to his regret i love your if its not to late i would like to bev you to update and i will leave a good reply evsn if the chapter us shiy wich i doubt will ever happen

P.S i also share your obsesion with the smexy winchwster brothers and would like to say you are completely forgiven .
P.S.S i will be realy pissed if you don't get this reply.
Update soon please dven if you don't, get them just one more chapter then you can quit for good if you'd like although i realy don't ant you to.

I have left you reviews before but they havent shown yet weird ...so i just want to say if it's not too late that i truley love your story i find the protective malchior adorable and i cant wait to see his reaction to her older self also in responce to your latest update i will admit i was disapointed but if its not to late i would like to beg you to continue to do the
fantasticly fabulos work that your doing and hopefully this review will show
P.S I too share your obsession for the smexy Winchester brothers and understand your dilema.

Oh my god is it too late.
I just want to say that i have been stalking this story form the day you began yes I'm a bit pissed at you but your update will make it all beter besides i too share your obsession for the Winchester brothers so all is forguven as long as you update i promise i will review them all .

dear God please please update tomorow i have been searching for a god malchior story since the first day of summer i just wamt yo say that i too share your obssesion with supernatural and i promise i will revew

nice

I ship Raven with Goth Boy like Captain Marvel with Rorek, Malchior his dragon familiar, or amalgam like Dante or Vergil from Devil May Cry with black clothes, guns, sword, guitar that makes lightning storms, briefcase pull anything from